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Reviews for Midnight Petal

By : Terketam
  • From AlabasterPrincess on July 05, 2009
    Interesting indeed! How long before the pressure gets to them, and when do we see her side of the story? I can hardly wait!
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  • From BloodyLove on July 03, 2009
    I like this alot. I'm very interested to know how you're going to have her take it. Hope you write more soon.
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on July 02, 2009
    Hi! I found a few errors and thought I'd help you by pointing them out.
    firstly, instead of three year olds i think you mean to say third years.
    when you put 'more greater', that is grammatically incorrect. it is simply 'greater'.
    There is no such word as 'shooked'.it is just 'shook'.
    where you put 'beeing' it should say 'being'
    Other than that, there are relatively few spelling errors and the whole thing is better written than some people on here who claim english as their only language!
    This story looks promising and I look forward to reading more soon. If you need any more help, especially with British English, don't hesitate to ask!
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