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Reviews for Finding You

By : kbygrave1124
  • From thrnbrooke on February 16, 2010
    Poor Draco!!! Sooooo need chapter 8!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 20, 2010
    Sooooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 18, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on July 06, 2009
    Chapter 4: Like I said before, this story has great potential, but it needs to be cleaned up.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 06, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 5!!! Harry seems on the right track!
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on July 05, 2009
    Chapter 3: OOOhhh...plot development! I like the idea that it may be something outside of the boys that might be pushing them together, but it's left ambiguous enough for it to be anything. It could be that their soul mates, or they might have been cursed, or any other kind of influence. Still a lot of spelling problems (one of the most common mistakes is your spelling of Slytherin; there's no 'e' on the end).
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on July 05, 2009
    Chapter 2 Review: Your spacing is a LOT better. There are still quite a few spelling errors, but there's been a decent amount of improvement. I like how they're reconsidering their decision because of all the interruptions. People expect them to fight, not snog. So they're getting a reality check that nicely balances out the rapid decision to become a couple. Be back after the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on July 05, 2009
    This is a good start, however, you might want to spread out your paragraphs a lot more. You also have a lot of run-on sentences. Look for places to put punctuation. Getting a good beta will help too. Also, check here for tons of fic-writing help: http://kamerreon.livejournal.com/. Kay is one of the best writers I know and her LiveJournal has a very good help-list for would-be writers. Check it out and good luck with this story.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 29, 2009
    Interesting! Can't wait for chapter 4!!!
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  • From Juana13 on June 29, 2009
    interesting...very interesting
    Looking forward to more. What's happening with the boys? Hope the explanation comes soon! Update soon please!! : )
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