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Reviews for An Unusual Solution

By : ronsmistress
  • From dannilawless on July 02, 2009
    yes please continue with the happy ever after!! Will they both be so rational with a baby?? Oooh!!
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  • From theomniscientjew on July 02, 2009
    oh pllleeeeeeasseee continue! you're story is fantastic!
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  • From Mellyissa on July 02, 2009
    I really think you should continue the story, they have so much potential together. Well done!
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  • From pstibbons on July 01, 2009
    A good ending. I don't think continuing is necessary. Looking forward to your next fic. (Do you post on ffnet? they've got author alerts there.)

    best lines:
    A week after the fight during the meeting, the Ministry of Magic was attacked in the dead of night. No evidence was left but one entire wing of meeting halls and courtrooms had been completely destroyed by a massive explosion.

    (Nice!)

    Three weeks later the Ministry of Magic officially announced that it was abandoning the Marriage Law. Several members of the Wizengamut council agreed that the threats to society were too much of a risk.

    “Do you want a divorce?” He asked quietly.
    “No.” She let the tears fall and looked up at him. His face was just as sad as hers. “I don’t want to divorce. I am happy……” He stopped her with a kiss.

    Severus, for all his antisocial behavior in public, was a cuddler in his private life. He loved to be held while they had sex, he loved to be kissed, and touched and she obliged him.


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  • From catysmom1028 on July 01, 2009
    please continue.

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  • From voraciousreader on July 01, 2009
    I think that might be the perfect place to end it, really. It fits so well with the characterizations you created, as well as with the pacing and feel of the story. I, for one, wouldn't cae if Fudge ever came out of hiding and we know they will have their happy ever after, now. Don't care if it was AU and OOC, I liked it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 01, 2009
    This is a wonderful story. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Tenar10r on July 01, 2009
    delightful story
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  • From Sampdoria on July 01, 2009
    Brilliant updates!
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  • From catysmom1028 on June 30, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From pstibbons on June 30, 2009
    best lines:
    Severus took in Longbottom’s casual clothes. “You were at the meeting?” Yes, being unmarried, and a highly paid healer, I’m first in line to be paired up. I’m still going to the demonstration though. This law can’t be passed.”

    “The fight as I understand it was started by some over enthusiastic protesters who decided to take out their anger on ministry employees. You wife should keep better company.”
    Severus slammed a fist down on his desk, causing Fudge to jump.
    “That fight was started by a Ministry official who shoved a young girl to the ground when she said she refused to be paired up with an old man like him.”

    “Rest assured Mr. Fudge I may be married and unaffected by this proposed law, but I will take just as active a part in opposing it any anyone else. You cannot do this to your public.”

    “I’m not sure either way, but I heard from Madame Rosemerta that she left for Cairo early.” He said, not mentioning how relieved he was.

    Before she could answer him, he had shoved a cracker in her mouth.
    “Just in case you are thinking of talking some more, I have plenty to shove in your mouth to keep you quiet if I run out of food.”

    (Fun chapter. Nice to see how others are being affected. Now, even if the law is repealed, the problem that the Monstery is trying to solve still remains - low birth rate. Perhaps our couple - together with folks like Neville and Draco - could suggest ways to get around this. Like child support payments from the Ministry, better child care, support for female employees who wish to take a year out to have a kid, and .... research into fertility potions. And social and financial penalties for arranged marriages between couples who are closer related than, say, fourth cousins. And an investiation into why some couples - Weasleys - are so much more fertile than others. That could be entertaining. Give Molly and Arthur serious roles...)
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  • From pstibbons on June 30, 2009
    best lines:

    “Since when do you worry about a woman’s happiness Sev?” The bitterness she had felt during their own relationship was showing.
    “Since I found a woman who is worth it.”

    The house elf told him that she had gone with Luna Potter to organize a demonstration.
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  • From Avivafae on June 30, 2009
    Oi! You left it at a cliffhanger! Please update soon!
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  • From MissLibrarian on June 30, 2009
    Always love your stories, this is another one I am thoroughly enjoying! You always have such interesting storylines and yet remain impressively lucid and fast paced. Thanks for posting, I shall eagerly await for more :) ~Marie
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  • From voraciousreader on June 30, 2009
    Good chapter, really showed the strength of their relationship and how Sev is willing to defend it.
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