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Reviews for An Unusual Solution

By : ronsmistress
  • From Sampdoria on June 30, 2009
    I will admit that this is a very AU-setting, but then again; this is fanfiction and every author has the right to make his or hers own versions of the plot. I do like it though; among all the angsty SEveruses it is nice to read a more relaxed Severus. There are some minor spelling/wording issues, but not so much that it was annoying and I am very much looking forward to read more!
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  • From pstibbons on June 30, 2009
    Nice way of dealing with Cathy.

    What are Severus' rules on being with Hermione?

    Glad the pair is protesting the Law. I'm worried about young witches, especially Muggleborns, who would be caught up in it and don't have the financial resources to escape the country. Will Sev and Hermione come with an underground railroad for them?
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  • From pstibbons on June 30, 2009
    best lines:
    “I have never known a woman to get her lovely dress and toes covered in dirt gathering plant samples.” He said.
    ...I'm just remembering an argument with my first girlfriend. She had yelled something, I forget what, but I do know what I came back with ‘I’m going to marry the first girl I meet who doesn’t care about her clothes.’.
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  • From pstibbons on June 30, 2009
    This makes a pleasant change. Thank you!
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  • From voraciousreader on June 30, 2009
    That was just perfect!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2009
    I like your nice Snape. I write him that way, too.

    Focus on the positive reviews. If all fanfiction was truly canon-compliant, there would be only a smattering of stories under the HG/SS heading, and they'd probably be hexing the hell out of each other in every last one of them.

    Trying to stay too close to the original works, in my opinion, means missing a bang-up opportunity to explore a lot of really fun creative avenues. I'm glad you write the characters the way you see them- please don't feel like you need to apologize for it. You're the one spending your time and talent to put it out there.

    I liked your description of the bed... kinda makes me wanna be in it. :o) And I liked that he held her hand. It was sweet without being over the top.
    I'll be watching for updates!
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  • From katiekrm on June 29, 2009
    I like it! Tan Severus. Hot!
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  • From Tenar10r on June 29, 2009
    Good concise story, I enjoyed it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 29, 2009
    An excellent start. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From auntbecky on June 29, 2009
    I haven't read the story. I just wanted to say that you need to ignore people when they complain about someone being ooc. If they want someone in character, they need to read the books. The whole purpose of fanfiction is to have the characters be as you see them.
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  • From voraciousreader on June 29, 2009
    I don't care if he's ooc, it works. I can actually see her presenting it to him that logically and it working. Snape was always suspicious of anything that smelled of romance, and Hermione wouldn't be much of a flirt. With these two as you have written them, an open, honest and sensible relationship would hav much mroe chance of working than any other pairing; even the ones I write! ;)
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  • From Laurakkc on June 29, 2009
    Good start. Fic or not, I don't think I'd want Snape to be too warm and fuzzy. He still had a hard life, a miserable upbringing, and had to depend on his wits and stoicism to survive and do the things he was ordered to do--for both sides. I think he's got a soft center, but he doesn't let it be known. Your Severus here sounded plausible in a one-on-one conversation with Hermione. (I love it when Severus gets the girl, so to speak. ;) )

    I hope you're going to update soon. I'm interested to see where you're going to take us.

    --laura

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