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Reviews for Coveted Persecution

By : Lissa1011
  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2009
    Hmm... so if he actually brought her from the Shrieking Shack to the entrance hall at Hogwarts... what does that mean? He does care about her on some level, but he has to torture her a little first...?

    Okay, seriously, you need to post the final chapter. I'm dyin' here.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2009
    woohoo! Hope Snape punishes her *properly*. MORRRRRRRRRE please!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 03, 2009
    Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2009
    I'm not a fan of dark fics, but I read it anyway.

    And it was amazing.
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 01, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more. I am a bit confused though, at the bottom of this chapter, you say completed in five chapters. However in the listing, it says it is already complete.
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  • From Tenar10r on July 01, 2009
    Interesting so far
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2009
    More please! Its too good to just stop here! :D
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  • From MooMandy on June 30, 2009
    Well, yay! When did you sneak this little gem in? Bravo, doll!
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  • From Angie30 on June 30, 2009
    Oh this story is so good, it gives me the chills. I always wondered why nobody went back for Snape's body after the battle was over or why they didn't try and help him. I know they were just students back then but surly Hermione being so smart could have tried something to save him. Excellent job, I'm so hoping you continue with this story.
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on June 30, 2009
    Freakin' sweet! That gave me chills. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - didi on June 30, 2009
    great start. please continue
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on June 30, 2009
    This story is awsome, please write another chapter soon!!
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  • From ANON - Chyara on June 30, 2009
    There's two chapters here. My blood is pounding. Where's there rest if it is complete as the summary says?
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 30, 2009
    This was an excellent story. I hope that you decide to change this from a completed story to a little bit longer one. There are way too many unanswered questions. Who left the book on Hermione's patio? Is Hermione going to Hogwarts to talk about finishing her education? Will Hermione break up with Ron?
    Since this also involves Snape wanting revenge on those who left him for dead, I think that you need to show that he is doing things to Ron and Harry as well.
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  • From use2b2t2 on June 30, 2009
    Interesting. Is this completed. If not, I would look forward to additional chapters
    Mare
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