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By : GuitarGuru87
  • From on July 01, 2009
    Wow that was really good. I really like what you've done to this fic. ^_^

    My one problem is your summary line. Writing an intro summary, believe it or not, is what pulls the readers in. It's like the back of a book. If the story summary doesn't catch your eye...you're not going to read it. So to write down that you don't need one and assuming that everyone is familiar with your work seems a little too sure of yourself. I understand you've written allot of stories, had to click on your profile to see, but even so some of us have yet to be familiar with your work. And so...it just comes off a bit presumptuous on your part. I hope you don't take it that wrong way, hun. I'm only saying this because I've already made a few blogs about it and made a poll about fanfic reader pet peeves and THIS one came as one of the five.

    In fact...I've already received a few private IMs from some online friends of mine telling me to check your fic out. And not because of the fic...but because they were highly amused by the tone of your summary. Some of them had compared it to the infamous. "I suck at summaries."

    Again...I hope you don't take it the wrong way and use it as constructive criticism because your writing is that amazing. =)

    Looking forward to your next update,
    Lexy Malfoy

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