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Reviews for Pure and Simple

By : CondemnedForLife
  • From ANON - Sue on October 03, 2010
    wow, I really like ur story. very interesting pairing. i really like ur oc, alexi as well. cant wait for update.
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  • From LadyLaran on October 01, 2010
    Absolutely wonderful! I love the healing going on here and hope that you'll continue with this!
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  • From ANON - Kelsi on September 30, 2010
    i luv it and cant wait ta see whats gonna happen next and i luv the bonding btw the 3 family members ^.^../
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  • From on October 02, 2009
    This story is pure genius, I'm absolutely enamored with your characters and I can't wait to read more.

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  • From dominique1 on September 19, 2009
    I lve it i hope that harry keeps his frineds and i like how pet and dudley realized themselves i hope that they move into one of harrys home s aand pet get a divorce and move's to the wizarding world update soon
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  • From Lucifoy on July 16, 2009
    uuuhh.. i
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  • From maggi22211 on July 13, 2009
    wow amazing work so far. loved all the 5 chapters. Your writing style is amazing and very easy to read and I just love how you have expressed and explained each characters and how you have developed the plot so far. Cant wait for more. Keep up the good work/
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  • From SweetWisteria on July 10, 2009
    Hey!
    I love Petunia and Dudley in this fic. They're different, but not CRAZY different to the point where it becomes cheesy. One thing- Petunia is a bit.. lackluster in character- she could use just a bit more personality and a little less history. Although, I love Petunia's "powers"- the seer thing is actually a very original idea (and a wonderful future plot device), and I'm very impressed. Heh, Harry should give Petunia his Divination books (it's not like he's ever going to use them again).

    About Harry.... I feel like he's a little too... perfect. It would be nice if you brought out a few of his flaws- make him seem a little more human.

    I loved the part where Harry "came out of the closet" so to speak. Very nicely done. I would love to see some exploration into Harry's relationships with his close friends. Especially Ron, who didn't really give his opinion of homosexuality.

    Oh, by the way, Hermione and Ginny have been acting a bit like fangirls- and while it make for a cute, and very funny scene, you should be careful to give their characters depth.

    I also quite like your original character- Alexi. He and Dudley make a very cute match, and he seems to have a well thought out personality.

    I can't wait for the main pairing of the story!!!!!!
    Much Love
    Sweet Wisteria
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  • From CassandraMalfoy on July 09, 2009
    This story of yours is great. :)

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  • From tinkita on July 08, 2009
    Great chapter
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  • From Ravenheart on July 05, 2009
    Poor Harry... But things have to get worse before they get better...

    Anyway, an odd pairing for Harry, one I've never really seen before. I hope they get together soon =)
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  • From tinkita on July 04, 2009
    Interesting story! Please update soon!
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  • From Winky73 on July 03, 2009
    Interesting story so far. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From lazycrazykitten on July 02, 2009
    I like it so far, plus I am interested in the pairing!!!! Keep the good work coming!
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