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By : RynStar15
  • From Robs on August 04, 2009
    Wow, nice chapter! So Hermione has finally gotten over herself and decided to trust Draco, huh? I'm glad that has happened. So what has Draco been up to then? From what Jimmy was saying it would seem like something sexual, but the way Draco is behaving makes me doubt that theory. I don't know, I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From absinthe on August 01, 2009
    Great chapter! I really like your plot so far. I'm intrigued by Hermione and Draco's relationship and their reluctant codependency.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 27, 2009
    That was one of the best "realization" moments I've read and I have read MANY! lol Thank you and please update again soon. HG4eva
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  • From Robs on July 26, 2009
    Ah, I thought he would save her. Ron is such an arse. At least Harry is living in the real world. I hope Hermione is OK. Maybe she'll trust Draco a little more now he's saved her again. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From emmibubbles07 on July 26, 2009
    Awesome cliff hanger! I can only imagine what happens next! I just hope I guessed correctly,haha. Amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next!! =]
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  • From Robs on July 26, 2009
    OMG no! I wonder if Draco will hear her and save the day? I hope he does. It seems like they're moving on, slowly. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From dragongirl on July 25, 2009
    That cliffie was not recomended for people with heart problems.. WOW!!!!!! Thank God I hope my Draco comes to his senses and to the rescue right!!! Please do not make us wait much, my nails will suffer to much.
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  • From MasochisticAero on July 20, 2009
    let me just say that i've read all yur stuff and i LOVE them all.

    i can't wait for yu to write more.!

    keep it up =]
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  • From Robs on July 19, 2009
    Another brilliant chapter! So they get to spend more time together then, eh? I thought they were actually going to come to a truce...but Draco fucked up. It seems they are both as volatile as each other, or both as unsure as the other. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From dragongirl on July 18, 2009
    Poor two, these two are close to a breaking point. Please more so we can follow....
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  • From margaritama on July 17, 2009
    testy testy granger...wow, love how its her who's the hard head....wonderful. it would appear that Draco's equipment is in working order. LOL
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  • From margaritama on July 14, 2009
    First, is it totally wrong of me to picture a turned on and hot Draco with a beautiful Hermione sitting astride his lap and ..... *shivers*

    Lovely chapter...really, the anger, the resentment, lashing out at everyone - and that's just Draco. Hermione is bottling it all up and just beating up Draco. She's using him as her personal punching bag. So wrong. I just adore Ginny in this chapter, standing up to Hermione.

    I can't wait for more. NO DYING IN THIS ONE DAMMIT RYAN!
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  • From Robs on July 14, 2009
    Fabulous chapter! I hope Hermione learns to get along with Draco. It gives them at least one thing in common. I am intrigued as to how this is going to play out! Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From dragongirl on July 14, 2009
    She is so bitte but is understandable.. please more!!!
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  • From on July 13, 2009
    I'm really impressed (and I'm not usually impressed easily). I particularly like that everyone is so in-character, even (especially!) the changed-sides Draco. (Molly slapping him was a great moment.) This is a common weakness in fanfic. (It's also nice not to have the distractions of poor spelling, grammar, etc.)

    I think that since the wizarding world has little to offer her in terms of help for the blind (probably permanent blindness is rare among magical folk), our heroine (ever noticed that "Hermione" looks sort of like "heroine" even though they're not pronounced at all alike?) should look to the muggle world for solutions to the situation in which she finds herself, and then adapting the muggle technology and other aids for the blind (books on tape, braille, etc., and the suggestions from Jillianspuzzlebox's review) to the magical world. Hermione has always been great at utilising her knowledge of both worlds in this way.

    On another note: can Draco still jerk off, or has he lost feeling there too? Everything below the waist? If so, I sure hope Mme Pomfrey can help him! What exactly happened to cause his injury? Not asking for physiological details, just how he got injured: more specifically, was it magic (e.g., a curse, like Hermione's blindness), or a natural (muggle) injury? I love Draco's interpretation of whatever Mme Pomfrey's actual explanation of his symptoms was: very in-character for someone who was doubtless never bothered to learn the most basic facts of "muggle" medicine or anatomy/physiology. IMHO, muggle-borns have the advantage in the wizarding world that they have been educated (formally, or just by familiarity) at least in the fundamentals of such subjects. Draco has doubtless been tutored in some nonmagical subjects (we know he's at least literate, and he probably can do arithmetic, if not real math), but I doubt that he ever learned any "muggle science."

    I'm eagerly awaiting your next update. (I bet if you don't post soon, you may start receiving rude mail and/or reviews from your *fans*, like poor George R.R. Martin! This is not meant as a threat -- I'd /never/ do that to an author -- just a prediction. At least if it does happen, you'll know you're in good company. :-} )
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