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Reviews for Haunted

By : RynStar15
  • From JadedFate on March 14, 2017

    15 chapters, a cliff hanger, and then unfinished. I wish you'd pick this one up again. Your stories are amazing!


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  • From MotekElm on January 05, 2017

    I enjoyed it, but was annoyed to find it abandoned at the peak


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  • From ANON - Victoria Cox on February 18, 2013
    This is a magnificent story, fast-paced, with a unique plot and impossible to stop reading (like all your stories are, really). I hope you haven't abandoned it because you've certainly left us with a cliffhanger. Such an exciting story.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 27, 2010
    Bad writer, that was mean! lol I was so happy for them; they'd fought it for too long, and then BAMMO! Now, you do understand that you brought this next sentence on yourself, right? Please don't make me wait too long to find out what's wrong with him. :-) Thank you, hon! HG4eva
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  • From apkblack on May 26, 2010
    Glad to have you back. I'd missed this story, was afraid it was abandoned. Lovely update. Nasty cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next ...
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  • From margaritama on May 25, 2010
    I don't trust Jimmy either...seems someone cursed him from behind.
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  • From dragongirl on May 25, 2010
    That was beautiful and sad at the same time......... Hey keep them coming your cliffie is to die for........LOL
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  • From olgameisterfunk on December 18, 2009
    You are soooooo evil, your crazy plot devices in which no one knows what the fuck is going on, and then they are intrigued and wants moreeeee!

    You know I love you...:) NOW UPDATE, DAMMIT! mwhahahaha, just kidding♥
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  • From lemonade8 on December 16, 2009
    I kept thinking this was another story, when it was one I wanted to keep up on! However, it was nice to have like, five chapters to read! Great story, love the pace, love the plot elements and the mystery.

    But, does the grindylow pain in an arm feel exactly like a dark mark would? I'm just curious. ;D
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  • From dragongirl on December 16, 2009
    Beautiful.... Love when he rescue her always............ More More More.......
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  • From lovingdraco on December 01, 2009
    Yay! New chap! Love it...keep it up! Want to see what happens next....story is getting interesting =)
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  • From amerereader on November 30, 2009
    Lovin' this story! And I can't wait for more. Although, I really do hope that Hermione gets her eyesight back! Hopefully that's what happens *wink*. :-)
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  • From apkblack on November 30, 2009
    Have read straight through to here, can't read anymore, have to get some work done, but had to review before leaving. It's a very compelling story.

    You're a good writer. The frustrations they're feeling with their disabilities, the emotional confusion, it's all laid out there very well for the reader to feel and experience with them. (Though he seems more confused, and more like he's working it through in his head, than she is ... she's a little one-dimensional/one-track with her hatred and distrust until now, but I have a feeling this will change after the almost-drowning incident.)

    The almost-drowning itself was done beautifully, very dramatic and frightening, and his coming to the rescue was done well, too ... the "you be my legs, I'll be your eyes" was very emotionally done.

    Lastly, and this is the most important thing with me when I read fanfics, is the pacing is right on. You're not unnaturally speeding up any of it, whether it's their budding acceptance of each other, or possible forgiveness of each other, or even their ability to be civil to each other for more than a paragraph. The pacing feels natural and real.

    Really well done. Am bummed to have to actually get something done for my paycheck before being able to finish what you've got posted already. Good stuff.

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  • From Bluedragon5544 on November 30, 2009
    I just got done reading all 13 chapter of this story and so far I think this story is great I wonder what will happen next to Draco and Hermione. I am looking forward to reading more. update when you can.
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  • From JillianUnleashed on November 29, 2009
    hello,

    glad to see a new post for this story, it's a great story and it's starting to pick up the pace and really get going. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing.
    Jillian
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