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Reviews for Unexpected Affections

By : MysticWitchRini
  • From ladyedgecombe on July 17, 2009
    Brilliant. I so love a Harry/Lucius fanfic. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on July 17, 2009
    Look, if a little rant is the price we pay for a good story, then rant on! So the plot thickens. Can't wait to see what they have in store for ol' Lucius! Keep up the good work and Keep on Ranting!!!
    Love and Kisses (and Chocolate Chip Cookies with M&Ms) P.W.
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  • From SuicideMilk on July 17, 2009
    I will admit that I have not read your other stories, I just discovered this site. With that said, I would also like to apologize, I meant no disrespect at all. I just became very caught up in your story and I misinterpreted your author's note. I'm excited to see how you are going to end this, because I have faith that it will be perfect. Consider my review turned around.
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  • From Elvira on July 16, 2009
    I love this! So sad, poor Lucius. And James cheated omn Lily? Shame on you James.
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  • From pointoftears on July 16, 2009
    Oh no! What a twist! Poor Lucius. Man, James is a jerk! Kinda makes sense now that Lucius tends to go through lovers, though. That sort of thing tends to leave its mark, whether a person realizes it or not. So is this the actual reason that Lucius doesn't want to be with Harry? Cause he looks like James and is just covering it up with the Voldemort excuse? I hope the two can work it out!

    Well, boss, I am working on the previous chapters. Lol I have hit a snag with my word processor. I will hopefully have it to you by tomorrow. Then you can send me the new stuff. Sorry it is taking so long! I will try not to let you down.
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  • From SuicideMilk on July 16, 2009
    I have just devoured your story and was thrilled until you decided to end it in just a few chapters. This story is more deserving of an actual telling. I believe a couple more chapters would not do it justice at all.
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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on July 16, 2009
    So happy for you. So now since you have seen the most recent movie the investment we all made in your story doesn't matter any more?
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  • From ANON - Gravilove19 on July 15, 2009
    I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From paganwoman on July 15, 2009
    Liking this story more with each chapter! Please update soon!!
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  • From pointoftears on July 15, 2009
    Seduction AND Domination you say? Sounds like fun.

    Great chapter, as usual. I enjoyed this chess scene almost as much as the first one.
    Poor Lucius just might get a complex about playing the game if that keeps up. Oh, and I also liked that Draco is in on it now as well.
    Soon it will be the whole household ganging up on Lucius to get him together with Harry. Oh, the possibilities there.

    The bedroom scene was hot, but very frustrating (Much like I am sure both men were feeling at the time, so awesome job setting the mood). They were just to get going and then Lucius had to go and start thinking. *tisk tisk*

    Last, but most important...whoa. You want me to be your beta? Seriously? Yea, Sure! I'll give it a go. I've never been a beta before. Sounds exciting.
    Here is my e-mail: see_in_color@yahoo. com (I added a space after the dot, just in case. Just delete it when you use it.)

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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 11, 2009
    sorry about not reviewing this but I have been reading other things.

    love the chapters!
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  • From Elvira on July 09, 2009
    You know, Ginny is evil. But she's awsome still. Doing all this for Harry to get on Lucius raidar. Lol. So funny though that she talks to Harry about those things you know. Lol.
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  • From pointoftears on July 09, 2009
    Whoa, the lamb has a rebellious side! I must say though, I like the image of Harry with piercings. I also like the idea you had of Harry's tattoo. Never really thought about that look for Harry before.

    Oh, by the way, the dream--poor Harry. No real action and Ginny teasing him. To top it off, ewwwwww, Umbridge in a string bikini? Forget getting rid of a hard on--Harry is lucky that image didn't make him retract into himself. *Shudders*

    Fun chapter! Harry and Ginny's interaction was wonderful. Now we get to sit back and enjoy everyone's reactions to Harry's new look.
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  • From DarkSorceress on July 07, 2009
    Well this chapter was nice, but maybe the tonsil hockey was a bit much.
    Oh well, you're the author and its your story.
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  • From Elvira on July 06, 2009
    Wow. Thats one kiss he will never forget. Lol. Please update soon!
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