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Reviews for Dreamstate

By : brayzen
  • From jaceni50 on January 09, 2010
    Don't know if I have already reviewed for this chapter or not, but GREAT Chapter! Loved it and can't wait for the next one. The suspense :D.
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  • From jaceni50 on November 04, 2009
    Crazy, but interesting. Hope you keep it coming. :)
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  • From caseyjarryn on November 03, 2009
    I love it!
    I hope you update soon! :)
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  • From caseyjarryn on November 03, 2009
    wow! Great first chapter!!
    very original storyline! :)
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  • From chiquitaf16 on November 03, 2009
    I like the direction this story is taking, the beginning of the chapter I thought it would be a torture story but by the end it looks like it will be Draco who is suffering in confusion. I look forward to your next chapter.
    Also you probably will need a Beta in the future because you had a few areas that had distracting errors like you put "is" instead of "his" several times and that is not something a spell check would catch.
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  • From margaritama on July 04, 2009
    fresh look at dreams....would love background on why her seducer/stalker/attacker is doing this....I assume its Post-War and Seventh Year? some background would be so helpful. also love descriptions of how the characters see each other - how does he see her and vice versa....thanks. looking forward to more...like the dark currents.
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