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Reviews for A Slave to a Slave

By : LydiasTravel
  • From Elphaba on July 17, 2009
    This is an excellent (and painful OUCH) Story. It is a twist I haven't read before.
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  • From Snapelover09 on July 17, 2009
    yay i was so happy when i saw two updates! lol keep up the good work and i cant wait for more
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  • From MyFairGentlemen on July 17, 2009
    I didn't really like how mean Severus was being to Harry. Though I know he said thats the only pain he will get pleasure from the entire time I was like "HOLY HELL OUCH". I did like the end though, Severus will get used to the idea of a child and love it and treat Harry as more then a slave!
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  • From mrequecky on July 17, 2009
    I loved this! But I really wonder, if Severus cannot see Harry getting hurt, why does he enjoy it with the piercing and makes Harry suffer more by working so slow?
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  • From starstruck86 on July 17, 2009
    *hits chest in effort to restart it*

    Well... if I thought the nipples were painful (thanks for the warning on the ice LOL) then the second chapter you posted... *speechless* But Harry seemed to enjoy it so i'm happy for him ;) And happy for Severus too because he seemed to enjoy it more than everyone. I'm no big fan of MPreg but I do want Voldy to have been wrong here.

    And now you're gone until Tuesday. *twiddles thumbs*
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  • From pointoftears on July 17, 2009
    Boy howdy, you weren't just whistling Dixie when you warned us about these chapters.
    I must say, they were both excellent. Awesome Harry/Severus lovin. Very intense and erotic.
    I had so many phantom pains for Harry after reading both of these chapters, though. Ye-ouch! That is a whole new ballpark of pain right there.
    I am glad that Severus comforted him after each set of piercings.

    Yay! You put my fears to rest. Severus seems to have decided.
    I also really like that Severus wants a family with Harry and wanted to raise kids with him. No baby factory for Harry.
    Happy Writing!
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  • From chibitsubasachan on July 16, 2009
    I love this story! I hope that Sev and Harry end up together. I'm sure Harry is carrying his child what I'm not sure of his how his powers come into play and how he will play out in the whole dark vs. light battle. Amazing job. Cannot wait until the next update ^-^
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  • From pointoftears on July 16, 2009
    Oh, Severus, why do you fight your emotions so? He really seems to be swaying back and forth with this. Not just internally, but externally as well. He keeps going from telling Harry that he will keep him forever to almost making hints that he could get rid of him soon. I hope he finally accepts his feelings for Harry soon. Very nice chapter. Steamy action, but it also showed just how attached the two are becoming (whether Severus wants it or not)

    Harry may just get his wish with the whole baby thing it seems. Although I must say, I was kinda upset by the thought that Harry hoped that there would be the possibility that he be allowed to help raise the baby. Would Severus just turn him into just some baby factory and not let him see the kids? That would be just way too sad and mean! Especially considering how special Harry is.

    Sorry. I am getting off on a rant. I do that with good chapters.

    Happy Writing!

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  • From spyderlunacy09 on July 15, 2009
    Severus! I love him so much! Can't want to read more.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 15, 2009
    Believe me when i start to write them you will be the frist one i come to....another great chapter....you keep painting those pictures and i will forever be here.
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  • From MalfolicAcid on July 15, 2009
    I honestly never thought I would be into a Snape X Harry fanfic...but I stumbled across this amazing story and I have to say if i had to choose whether or not to stumble again I would throw myself instead. Your story is spectacular...and from an avid Draco X Harry fan, I would love to thank you for the Draco kiss scene! >.
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  • From starstruck86 on July 15, 2009
    Loved the chapter, and the way Severus is trying to hide/deny what he's feeling for Harry. And so Harry wants Severus' babies... hmmmmm! ;)

    And yes, your Harry is infinitely less annoying than most, but it's just me. I've always been the lass that falls for the sidekick, hence why I'm writing Ron and not Harry ;) I like your Harry's willingness to please and learn, and he actually really is quite sweet.

    Draco, Draco... hmm. I think maybe he'd benefit from a cock ring, being bound and being the 'practice boy'. If, of course, Severus is man enough to stomach Harry touching someone else.... it'd certainly throw up all his emotions again!
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  • From MyFairGentlemen on July 15, 2009
    I love how Severus is developing feelings for Harry but he is trying to hide it. I hope Harry breaks down his wall and they can be a family like Harry hopes for.

    (btw; Did you see the movie?! It was FANTASTIC)
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  • From Hambares on July 15, 2009
    Hot, Hot chapter! I hope they make it safely into Gryffindor! I have so many worries!
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  • From Orkchild on July 15, 2009
    Okay you asked for ways to punish Draco. Since they will be going into or throught a military camp at the border. Binding, placeing a cock ring and blindfolded to serve the needs of the camp with his mouth and no release.
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