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Reviews for A Slave to a Slave

By : LydiasTravel
  • From spyderlunacy09 on July 27, 2009
    Harry's Allergic to silver?! I'm so happy that Draco broke his father's rules to save Harry...*goes to next chapter*
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on July 27, 2009
    Well even through all of that I'm happy that Draco is learning his place with Lucius and that Lucius still loves his son.
    Oh and Blaise, Blaise's internal happiness is realistic and adds another dynamic to the story.
    Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - someone on July 27, 2009
    I have to admit, I was a little squiked with the whole Hagrid business.
    Will Blaise's jealousy evolve into something more sinister?
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  • From pointoftears on July 27, 2009
    I loved the interaction with Harry and Severus at the beginning of this chapter. Severus was so sweet and caring to Harry and explaining to him about what happened. I got a funny little image when Severus told Harry to grab himself of Harry with this surprised face and his hand flying down to touch himself without even thinking about it. It made me chuckle. I don't know if that was your intention, but it was a cute and slightly humorous part so kudos!

    I have to say, the part with Blaise and Hagrid was kind of weird for me. I don't really like thinking about Hagrid as a sexual being (Kinda makes me get a full body shudder) but his personality in this was so different that I just tried imagining it as a different person/giant all together and it was a little better. Will Blaise continue to be jealous and resentful to the two other slave boys even after they helped him through that? Who was the one to say that Blaise was doing good? It didn't say. In my mind, I imagined Harry saying that, but it could have been Draco just the same.

    The scene at the end was hot. I like how possessive, but still gentle Severus is with Harry. Why did Harry volunteer to have sex with Hagrid? I guessed it was just his self-sacrificing bravery coming through. But back to the Snarry - very nice lovin'. I wonder when Harry is going to discover that he is probably with Severus's child.

    Lucius can never stay mad at Draco. I am glad he decided to cave in though. I don't think he would want Draco to be completely submissive. I think he likes a little bit of will from his son/slave. Draco seems to be a little more controlled, but still has a mind of his own.

    Sorry, I'm gushing. It was just a good chapter. I hope your surgery goes alright. Hope you feel better and aren't too sick from the anesthesia. Get well soon!
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  • From Elphaba on July 27, 2009
    Well I didn't expect that! Great chapter!
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  • From CodyMThomas on July 27, 2009
    *Squeeeeee!* Oh wow this is such a great story! I couldn't put it down for a single minute, and your updates are so fast! Thanks for all the lovely spoiling of your readers, this story is wonderful and I can't wait to read more. ...I soooo have to put this one in my favorites, it's too yummy to lose track of. ^_^

    I hope your surgery goes well, the pain killers they give you afterwards are awesome, so I wish you luck and no pain!
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  • From Hambares on July 27, 2009
    OMG! Eiwww - Hagrid! That opened my eyes! But oh it was hot when they were all back in the carriage!
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  • From ANON - allyroksmuch on July 27, 2009
    I have to admit that i was a little wary when I first started to read this story, but i am happy to say that am completely addicted...lol! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    Ally
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  • From Snapelover09 on July 27, 2009
    I hope your surgery goes well...i can't wait for more!
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  • From starstruck86 on July 27, 2009
    Well jelly would be interesting, i'm not going to pretend.

    Good chapter, though I am sat twitching a little purely because Hagrid was involved *twitch* Sure i'll get over it soon, though. ;)

    Good luck with your surgery x
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  • From danawarner on July 27, 2009
    Blaise is so petty.
    I've never heard of a silver allergy. Gold, yes. Silver, no (unless one is a Were)
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  • From Silzar19 on July 26, 2009
    Aww Poor Harry. Now Blaise will probably start being mean to him because he's stealing the lime light off of him. I like how Harry talked Draco into seeing a different view of his relationship with his father. That his father really does care about him. Though I think the slap to the face and then the almost second one was a little much, but I can see where he's coming from. Update soon
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  • From wolfcathope on July 26, 2009
    I think something is brewing with blaize. Love the story keep going.
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  • From Snapelover09 on July 26, 2009
    I just came back from a mini vacation and I was so happy to find a bunch of chapters waiting for me....keep it up
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  • From Elphaba on July 26, 2009
    Allergic to silver interesting. And me thinks Blaise is a bit jealous. Hope he doesn't take it out on Harry.
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