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Reviews for A Slave to a Slave

By : LydiasTravel
  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 26, 2009
    great chapter and I hope Blaze gets what he deserved.
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  • From pointoftears on July 26, 2009
    Huzzah! This was wonderful. Any kind of Snarry interaction is great in my book. In fact, emotional can be just as good as physical, if not better. Not only was this good Severus/Harry development, but Harry and Draco as well. They seem like they are going to be friends and that Draco is kinda protective over Harry. On that note:

    Poor Harry! he keeps on having all these bad things happen to him. I had a friend who developed an allergy to silver and found out the hard way too, except that was only her ears and it was years after she had had them pierced. I hope that he gets better. I have a feeling though that he is going to be even more upset that the piercings were removed than anything else. He was in a near panic when Severus didn't return his plug.

    I don't like Blaise. Nope. Not one bit. He is officially on the baddy-man list. It's one thing to be jealous of Draco since he and the blonde both are Lucius's, but he better watch it thinking those bad thoughts about Harry. Grrrr....
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  • From starstruck86 on July 26, 2009
    Oh noes! I sense a war developing between Blaise and Harry.

    And ouch, i knew those bloody piercings would turn out to be no good! *wince* Poor Harry. But, squee, look how caring and doting Sev is getting. Eee. And, for the record, I don't mind whether we see them physically or emotionally together, I don't think it would work without one or the other if you see what I mean. Without Severus' burgeoning emotional moments and Harry's sweetness it'd probably become too much at times. I like seeing both sides of them.

    And, cupcakes? Nom. ;)
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  • From on July 26, 2009
    I loved your original version but I really really love this one. I'm interested to see where you take Blaise as a character. keep up the amazing work.
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  • From BeautifulScript on July 25, 2009
    Apologies for not replying to your question earlier - had disappeared from net world for a while. However, the one you'd come up with is splendid. I don't think I'd have managed to come up with anything quite like it, but it was an enjoyable read.. even if I feel a bit sorry for Draco.
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  • From yuiop12345 on July 24, 2009
    Love your story! I am reading this for the snarry so looking forward to the next chap, though this chapter was good to. Update soon!
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  • From mrequecky on July 24, 2009
    Oh wow, these updates were awesome!!! Poor Draco and poor Lucius, they both suffer...
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 24, 2009
    wow! what a punishment!

    I don't think I could do all that!, and I like S&M!!!!!!!!

    great take on a slave's life.
    Keep it going!
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  • From pointoftears on July 24, 2009
    Well, I would hope that after all of that, Draco is not going to go outside of his master's wishes any more. We shall have to see though. He so liked to push the boundaries that I think it may be difficult for him to change immediately. I just hope Lucius isn't so harsh the next time. All that whipping made my back hurt. lol.
    Aha! You did use psychological punishment as well. Poor Draco. He seems so broken now.

    Okay, I am almost convinced now that Blaise isn't the nice, docile slave he appears to be on the outside. He is just so jealous of Draco. I have a feeling he is going to try something. Either to try to get Draco out of the picture, or to get himself higher on that totem pole he keeps talking about and betrays the whole group. Maybe I am just paranoid.

    Can't wait for the next chapter! More Snarry...yes?

    Happy Writing!

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  • From Hambares on July 24, 2009
    I really do think these last two chapters taught Draco a valuable lesson. He was just not understanding his relationship to Lucius in their arrangement. Now - now - I think he has a much better grasp of it. Hard, yes - tough love, yes - worth it, oh yea!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 24, 2009
    "........WOW........WOW......WOW......" you did it again. great job.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on July 24, 2009
    Maybe now Draco will straighten up and not be the overconfident slytherin he always. I thought he was leading Harry down a path of disobedience in a few of the chapters every time he said they won't know. Really nice chapter. I have to go out of town this week to take care of my father who had knee replacement surgery. I won't be able to get back to my beloved stories for a whole week. When you post again, don't think I left you. I hope to catch up when I get back and see some Snarry as well as more Draco and Lucius. Keep up the great writing.
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  • From Elphaba on July 24, 2009
    Wow that was an amazing 2 chapters! OUCH!
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  • From starstruck86 on July 24, 2009
    I feel so sorry for Draco. Its his own fault but still.

    And yay, now we're back to Harry and Sev in the next chapter, right? Must confess i've missed them!
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  • From Makovaso on July 24, 2009
    good chapter, please update soon.
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