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Reviews for I Want Candy

By : triz
  • From Persy on January 05, 2022

    Sweet...just like candy!!!!!


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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on July 10, 2009
    LOL, she needs to be more specific. Liked it very much,
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  • From nowgolden on July 07, 2009
    a few mistakes, but other than that, this was very very cute
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  • From katiekrm on July 06, 2009
    That was very sweet and cute.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on July 06, 2009
    LMAO! That was a pip! Excellent work and I can't wait to read more of your writing in the future!
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  • From nonentity on July 06, 2009
    very cute misunderstanding. It's interesting how Severus deals with the pregnancy and his family--very long-suffering. It might help to rework the candy conversation a bit? I had to think for a while before being comfortable with the conversation, since most people would say they wanted chocolate, a candy bar, or a Snickers instead of candy if they wanted a Snickers bar. Maybe a more candy-ish candy like Starburst (or the British equivalent)? Smarties maybe? They're rather M&Mish type candies in British commonwealth countries.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on July 06, 2009
    this is soooooo cute
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