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Reviews for Bid for Love

By : triz
  • From ANON - Robin on July 23, 2009
    Oh, just knocking some sene into our lovesick professor.
    Honestly, I may be cruel, but I don't think it's that bad. He needed that.
    Quite an impulsive swinger dear Trelawny isn't she?
    Oh, Poppy will have patched him up in no time.
    I just wonder what you're going to with Hermione to get her out of her bad mood...
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  • From lilashannah on July 23, 2009
    All right Trelawney!!!Poor Sev! Great chappy.So Sev asked the headmaster for help on getting the girl?ROFL!!
    Hell has frozen over.Have you ever thought that maybe D.D was sorted into the wronge house?
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 23, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From neelix on July 23, 2009
    ha... Imagine leaving her a cheque~ idiot man!
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  • From starstruck86 on July 23, 2009
    MWahaahaha!

    Okay, shouldn't be laughing about him getting his nose broken but still. Glad he's seen some sense though. Daft git.
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  • From fuzzydraco on July 22, 2009
    Ooo. Nice. I love how Hermione let him have it. All four times. :)
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 22, 2009
    This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione can move on after being emotionally hurt by Severus. I think that he should have thought about things before doing anything right away, especially since he made Hermione feel like he used her. Hopefully she doesn't end up pregnant by him after their one night together. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Robin on July 22, 2009
    ARGH!
    Poor Hermione! (Yes, I know...) But what was she other to think when he had left her with the money and nothing else? Hell, I'd feel like that if that ever happened to me!
    And then Severus doesn't know what hit him. Maybe he should get some book - a dictionary for woman-english/english-woman or the like ;-)
    Ah, I just hope you get them back together again soon. I'm really interested in how they are solving this little problem.
    Well, guess I have to wait for the next update that will be up soon *hint hint* ;-)
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  • From CryingCinderella on July 22, 2009
    :-/ It really could have ended the chapter before. This just draws out her character in a most unpleasing way. And although I'm sure you intend to reunite them somewhere in the upcoming additions, it really was good where it stood. I find that all too often, authors (including myself) don't know when to leave a good thing lie. But I suppose I was stay on board to see where this goes.
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  • From starstruck86 on July 22, 2009
    Tut tut. Someone's intelligence left him overnight!

    I eagerly await to see how he plans to dig himself out of the hole.
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  • From CryingCinderella on July 21, 2009
    This was an entertaining story. The concept was there, but the character depth was lacking. It could have used a bit more time really developing Severus and Hermione, though the touching moment between Sibyl and Severus was very unique. It shows us that softer side that we all wish to believe he has, and it did bring her down to earth more for us. The only thing that seemed out of place was his inability to keep it in his pants. I mean, yes making out with Hermione Granger after years of being alone may ultimately undo a man, but feeling as if he can't eat because of the "natural enhancers" on the menu? I do wish we'd seen a bit more of their love making. (Sorry if the comments are all over the place.) Your characterisation of the various girls who were eager to bid on Severus was also intriguing. And I found a good laugh, in a tender way, at Millicent Bulstrode and her bid on Harry Potter. It did keep me entertained, so overall, good work.
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on July 19, 2009
    A little bite! You tease! I very much liked it.
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  • From lilashannah on July 19, 2009
    Good lord that was hot! More please!!
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  • From Tenar10r on July 19, 2009
    Hot Hot oooo HOT!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 19, 2009
    A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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