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Reviews for The Long-Desired

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From helga1967 on August 23, 2009
    Funny and variate. Very good
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  • From ANON - jenny on August 23, 2009
    Thank you too. I like the everyday life. :)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 23, 2009
    about #12...and the whole story in general.

    I have to say I applaud you on telling a story in a genre that hardly
    gets recognition from HP readers, thank goodness for curiousity. Right?

    When this story first started I wasn't sure how in the HELL you were going
    to get Harry together with Draco, considering Harry's bitterness & remorse.

    But, you pulled it together, gurl! Big props...and I, also, like to toot
    my horn in saying I think I had a hand in getting you to get these sequels
    going, while the first part was lying in the HP Fandom Zone.

    ^___^ Heh!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 22, 2009
    lol now that last part was truly hilarious!
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  • From on August 22, 2009
    An excellent chapter! I just loved how most of it was slightly pointless (no offense intended) but still priceless; such as Harry buying Draco's robes and the Burrow scene which could have been left out (though I loved it and I'm glad it wasn't). The best part of all this was just being able to see Harry live, now that he's mostly back to his normal self. It's so satisfying to see him laugh and smile.

    I'm very excited to see the two combine their magic again and work to take down a Dark creature. And also excited for the smut, of course :D Great job!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 22, 2009
    Since Draco is considered dead he can't get access to his money. That's odd to think of Harry as the affluent one.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on August 22, 2009
    Oh man, I'm sad that there's only one chapter left! But this has been great to read so far. I'm glad that Harry is getting back with the Weasley's and everyone else! Awesome work, keep up the great job!
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  • From BeyondTheTwilight on August 22, 2009
    Only one more chapter!?
    How sad. lol

    But very exciting.
    i cant wait for the end!
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  • From ANON - jenny on August 13, 2009
    wonderful. :) you made my day.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 13, 2009
    well damn
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 13, 2009
    about #11...

    I think for a brief second I had a 'Hallelujah' moment. O_o

    Harry has FINALLY come to terms with his situation and is
    going to let his feelings surface and take a leap off the
    razors-edge.

    It's not a relationship, but at least, it has the makings of
    becoming a beautiful friendship..with perks. :-)

    ..and it would be interesting to see how the magic works between
    them [I completely forgot about that].

    I take it we have 2 more chaps. after this?

    By the way, what DID happen to Draco's parents..and will Draco get
    more clothes?
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  • From on August 13, 2009
    Wow! I didn't see that coming! I honestly was not expecting more smut than the bits you usually gloss over when Draco feeds and I didn't mind not expecting that, which is a very high compliment in my books xD To have me so swept up in the plot and character developments and conflicts and everything else that I'm not expecting smut, which I'm ALWAYS expecting while reading at AFF--that's an accomplishment. Well done! And well done with the smut scene too, by the way ;) I never thought sex with a vampire could be so hot.

    My favorite part of this chapter was the bit when Draco first woke up and he and Harry were having a simple conversation (albeit with some intimacy interlaced). I just loved the easy interaction there while they conversed about Harry's future, had a few laughs, and shared some of their feelings. It was very refreshing and very well-deserved after all they've been through. I'm really enjoying the dynamics between them (not that I haven't enjoyed it from the start).

    And speaking of Harry's future, it'll be interesting to see Harry and Draco working together to hunt other kinds of Dark creatures. Even though I'm not sure you'll take the story that far. I've found that I'm never quite prepared when you end a story. I always get so caught up in the tale I just expect it to go on forever.

    Great job, and I'm satisfied enough by the ending of that chapter to wait patiently for the next ;)
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  • From BeyondTheTwilight on August 12, 2009
    Wow! quite amazing.
    it took me a while to comment on this story, because i was just so enthralled with it. i couldnt find the words to explain how much i love it.

    Lol i still cant.
    Great Job,
    Kiersten
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 12, 2009
    Fantastic!!! I soooo need chapter 11!!!
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  • From on August 10, 2009
    Excellent chapter! I particularly enjoyed the moment where Draco 'crowded' Harry to get closer to him because of Harry's good mood. I hope for Draco's sake that he gets to see that more often considering how happy it makes him, and of course Harry too.

    I think my favorite thing about this story is how every step forward Harry takes happens for a legitimate reason. He agreed to let Draco drink his blood because he could see Draco cared about him. He agreed to let Draco live with him because Draco proved he would burn for Harry. And now he's allowing himself to grow closer to Draco because Draco was able to put his pride aside to help repair Harry and Ron's friendship. It's not just like "over time Harry grew to love Draco". That's what I like best.

    I'm excited to see how their relationship will progress after this! Thanks for the awesome update :)
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