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Reviews for The Long-Desired

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 09, 2009
    seriously i would have slugged ron for what he suggested.
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  • From ANON - jenny on August 09, 2009
    Thank you. I had a wonderful trip. :) I really like how this is going but i can only guess at what could happen next. cant wait.
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  • From ANON - Juliashka_Shu on August 09, 2009
    god, this is brilliant)))) they are wonderful, entrancing... want to know more every time you post another part. thank you)))
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 09, 2009
    Aww I wanted to see Draco kiss Ron's foot. At least he kept the sock on. Bare feet are nasty.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 05, 2009
    aww damn that's really sweet
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 05, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 10!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 05, 2009
    about #9...

    Now, THAT was different. That's the first time I've read about Ron ACTUALLY
    trying to hex Harry into submission during a fight, instead of the usual
    yelling.

    Kinda gave the chapter an unusual 'funny' atmosphere. You know I thought
    for sure you would have had Draco to prematurely wake up and intervene
    on Harry's behalf, but that would have been premature.

    All in all, it will be interesting to see how this end. Speaking of ending,
    I've noticed a few of your stories as of late, they seem to have an
    'open-endedness' [yes I made that up] about them. In other words, there's
    no sense of finality...they feel as if you were thinking of doing an
    'epilogue to finish the story', but decided against it at the last
    minute.

    Have you noticed?
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  • From JtheChosen1 on August 04, 2009
    I literally LOL'd at the tea scene!!! That was brilliant!

    Although I got sad when Ron drew his wand on Harry. I can understand why though, a concerned friend worrying over his best mate. So I get it....

    ....still mad at Ron though, the loser prat!

    Great work as always!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 04, 2009
    I like Ron in this. He's looking out for Harry which is something he tends not to so in other fics.
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  • From on August 04, 2009
    Haha, you're probably right. Harry's too stubborn for his own good sometimes xD

    Ahh, Ron! How I've missed him. And he was so wonderful in this chapter! My favorite bit was his line: "You
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  • From ANON - jenny on August 04, 2009
    Woohoo... I went on a 4 day vacation and when i came back 2 chapters awaited me. Yay. This is better than a birthday present. :)
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  • From ANON - Yuutousei on August 04, 2009
    [/is too lazy to log in]


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  • From InuyoukaiMei on August 02, 2009
    Yay! Harry has finally accepted the bond!

    Aww, poor Draco! He's right, if anyone's going to get bored, it would be Harry.

    Last line is awesome. It really shows that Harry has not forgotten that Draco is a Vampire and is fine with it. I still can't wipe the grin from my face.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 02, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 9!!!
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  • From rafiq on August 01, 2009
    Can't wait for Ron to find out about Harry and Draco.
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