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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From mrequecky on July 27, 2009
    ohhh, i just love this!
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 26, 2009
    Sooo need chapter 7!!! Hermione is one amazing woman!
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  • From ANON - jenny on July 26, 2009
    Ah... That last chapter was sooooooo worth the wait. I am going to make a point right now to read all the other fics you have because i enjoy your writing so much. :)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 25, 2009
    about #5...

    Well, it's about time!

    The 'Man-who-Lived-to-Give-Denial-a-New-Definition' is finally contemplating
    that MAYBE he needs to step back and get a new perspective on what he's doing.

    Hmph, as long as Malfoy keeps a cool head and doesn't do anything rash or move
    TOO fast Harry will start to get used to the IDEA and hopefully, used
    to the man/vampire.

    Then, we'll see from there.
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  • From InuyoukaiMei on July 25, 2009
    I wasn't expecting any of that!! Not that I can predict what you write, but that's besides the point!! What a turning point!! And I would apologize for all the exclamation marks, but I didn't think you would appreciate caps lock. ^_^
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  • From orpiment99 on July 24, 2009
    Lovely chapter. I hope Harry's recovery isn't quite that quick... But I like that he no longer sees Draco as a two dimensional vampire caricature.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on July 23, 2009
    Very good work!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 23, 2009
    OH wonderful!!! I soooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 23, 2009
    Twisted, but poor Harry and more so the poor Hawk. It's bad to lose your mind.
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  • From ANON - dana_aeryn on July 21, 2009
    Like this Harry. He is so obviously in denial about his own obsessions. I actually think he is just as bad as the vampires he hunts because at least they aren't as single minded as he is (about killing humans.) He can't even see that something is definitely wrong when he has to resort to dark magic to 'save' himself from Draco. In a way, even with all his strengths, I think this Harry is a coward because he uses the excuse of Ginny's death to justify his own bad behavior. He is selfish in his grief because he acts like he's the only one who loved Ginny and mourned her. He does what he wants to do and actually, I don't really think he really cares for anyone other than himself. Even in his interaction with Hermionie he kept thinking about himself.Yes, he thinks about being close to losing his friends, but it isn't long until he's back to his self-involved thinking. Anyway, enough rambling. Let's just hope Draco stops him from completing the spell. Draco is also living a half life so I thing the two of them with balance each other out, if only Harry would let go of his fear and hatred. Can you tell I've enjoyed this series a lot?
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  • From mrequecky on July 21, 2009
    This is just-in-time in action :D Loved!
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  • From SParker on July 20, 2009
    about #4...

    *Draco smashes through the wall and smacks Harry across the head to make him drop the
    knife...then keeps on smacking* 'What...the...Hell...is...wrong...with...you!!!'

    Me:Yeah!!! Keep smacking him, while I call the S.P.C.A & PETA!!!!
    ***********

    Seriously though I'm surprised you can keep all of these stories straight
    without going through a mental block. :-)

    Ooops, hope I didn't jinx you.


    PS: actually that WOULD be funny if you wrote that in. I DOUBLE dog dare you!
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 20, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 5!! Did Draco stop it?
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  • From ANON - jenny on July 19, 2009
    I look forward to the next chapter. :) I am totally enthralled by your story.
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  • From rafiq on July 19, 2009
    Can't wait to learn how the interrupted spell affects Harry, or Draco, or both.
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