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Reviews for The Long-Desired

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on July 07, 2009
    Oooo...I was wondering whether you'd post this soon.

    1. You're a brave young woman to continue this series in a section that
    really doesn't do well on vampire stories. I still say the holidays are
    the best time.

    2. I was curious to see what you'd name the third one. After Mongoose
    and Viper, I was thinking 'Weasel', 'Fang', Rikki Tikki Tavi [just
    kidding. :-)], or 'Cobra'.

    3. Let's see, you've done vampires, werewolves, veelas...hmm, what else
    could you do???

    Hmm...OH I got it!!!! How about the...Undead!?!

    That's one that hasn't been touched yet. Think you can handle it? Heck, IF I
    was a writer, I'd tackle it.
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  • From InuyoukaiMei on July 07, 2009
    I feel horrible about the fact that I can't review your fiction as much as possible, and for that, I am truly sorry. This review will sum up my feelings from "Mongoose", "Viper" and the first chapter from "The Long-Desired".

    Your writing inspires me, leaving me breathless and craving more (not unlike Draco's situation with Harry). I feel the frustration from Draco and find my lips curling into a snarl as he gets fed up with the almost impenetrable shield from Harry. I tense with Harry, the sensation of breath crawling across my throat sends shivers down my spine and the sting of the bite makes me wince. I experienced the pleasurable high Harry found within the arms Draco(without the actual...*ahem* well, you know). And I identify with the determination of Draco to make sure his Long-Desired basks in leisure wrapped in a loose embrace.

    I hope they both find their happiness (thank goodness I've read your other works to know that they will).

    I hope you continue doing the best writing on AFF (in my opinion) as I sit in eager anticipation of your scheduled update days.

    -Inuyoukai Mei
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  • From rafiq on July 07, 2009
    A great start to the end of this 3 part story. I can't wait for Hermoine to have another talk with Harry.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 07, 2009
    Sooo need more! Will Hermione and Ron help Draco?
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