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By : fuzzydraco

From dragongirl on August 24, 2009
They both piss that was so much fun!!!!!! I cannot wait for the other 2 coming!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Kitty Contagious on August 24, 2009
loving it.
looking forward to the next installment
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From margaritama on August 24, 2009
poor draco, drunk and silly...didn't get to see gorgeous granger grind....
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From kazfeist on August 24, 2009
Cute scene, with them both passed out at the end. Hopefully, someone will have a camera in the next chapter. :D
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From Rosamund on August 15, 2009
Awesome update! Loved it! What did I state in a previous review? Hmmm...need to check...oh, I think i know ;)
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From HarryGinny4eva on August 14, 2009
Aww, poor, little, longing-from-afar Draco. ha ha ha Love your Blaise! I know you said you had troubles with this chapter and the one I am waiting for (yes, that was a very not subtle hint, lol), but I am not seeing it in the story. So, just keep doing what you're doing. I will be here reading and enjoying. :-) Thanks, HG4eva
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From dragongirl on August 13, 2009
He is in for the surprise of the lifetime.. lol.... Oh this is getting hot hotter.
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From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2009

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From Avivafae on August 13, 2009
I love this story. I just wish AFF had the same auto-update for chapters that FF.net has. Then I'd know exactly when to look for the next installment. I've really enjoyed each scene and I love that you've had them meet each other first outside of the club. Serendipity.
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From margaritama on August 13, 2009
HE had a little crush...awwwwww! But he's still a dirty dog. LOL - more more more
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From OpheliaS on August 13, 2009
Ah, someone is...enamored by la petite filla.
So sweet.
Now..when he finds out that Hermione is his little wicked witch...
I'd like the front row seat in order to see the look on his FACE.
Bwuahahaha. Who ever said, Hermione Granger wasn't sexy?
Eat your words. lol.
I'm loving the turn of events in this chapter.
Hope you update soon!
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From bushwaala on August 12, 2009
Hi, Well I finally got a chance to look at your fan fic. I will admit two truths about myself; 1)I really enjoyed the first HP movie, though I am sure it was condensed, and 2)I haven't read or seen anything else on the subject except for an SNL skit starring Lindsey Lohan as Hermione after puberty hit. Luckily for me these two instances allowed me to realize the mythology of HP and incorporate the sexual situations you are trying to establish. This also puts me in a position to review your work in an authoritarian manner rather than someone who completely understands the lore. Having said that:

First off I would like to say that you have an uncany ability to write for men as well as about them. The scenes aren't overly emotional yet the sexual tension is palpable. This is exactly how I write. Also I think you depict the dances with the perfect amount of detail and imagery. Some people do not understand "theatre of the mind" but the visual directions you gave were perfect without trying to explain every feature and nuance. I am so impressed by your artistry that I would suggest that you may want to pursue an entire line of fan fic outside of HP dedicated entirely to Exotic Dancing. Maybe having a club where all the greatest female (and perhaps male) characters meet. But try to keep the Incredible Hulk and Marry Poppins out of those. They both creep me out (lol).

I also have a great suggestion for how Hermionie and Draco could meet. My favorite table-top Dancing scene was from Robert Rodriguez' "Dusk Til Dawn" where Salma Hayek comes out to scilence with a huge snake draped over her shoulders and dances on a table for Quentin Tarentino. Perhaps she could use some type of location spell to show her the hidden wizard and she dances over the table tops to where he is seated.She see's it is Draco, a man she hates and he finally comes close to women he lusts over yet cannot truly know due to the mask. It would be a great way to increase the sexual tension as well as through a wrench in the story. However I hate notes so I understand if you disreguard this. It just means I am paying attention.

Anyway, keep adding to it. I think you have a good I dea brewing here.
-kevin
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From ANON - Becca on August 11, 2009
Wow! That's really all I have to say. Imaginative plot and you've pulled it off perfectly... I can't wait to find out what Draco does when he eventually discovers that it's Hermione that he's lusting after! :)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - Draco'sKitten~ on August 10, 2009
I'm truely and utterly hooked on this story! Draco/Hermione is my favorite HP pairing and I adore the way you are keeping their personalities so constant and mature. I read this whole thing in one sitting! Please update soon. You are doing an excellent job!
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From kazfeist on August 08, 2009
Loved the two updates that you uploaded while I was out of town. I bet Draco will notice a similarity to Hermione's dancing, won't he? :D
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