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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Head of Black

By : TheRealLoneWolf
  • From ANON - Jack on January 29, 2017

    A typical -Dumbledore is the source of ALL Evil bullshit fic-

    Seriously, you fanfic writers get a hard-on simply from bashing dumbledore


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  • From ANON - LordNemesis on September 21, 2012
    Just finished reading this story so far its ok expect for what is happening between Tonks and Harry sorry I just cant see it happen.
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  • From ANON - LordNemesis on September 21, 2012
    Great story the only thing I do not like so far is how Harry is treating Tonks. Im sorry curse or no curse I think Harry would never treat anyone one the way he is treating Tonks or he would ask Hermione to help him brake that curse at least.
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  • From chi90504 on May 13, 2012
    while i am still i virgin i've spoken with many female friends who are not virgins and some girls are lucky and barely feel it when their hymen is torn others feel pain worse than a cheeses grater across the face and chest with salt after and most are some where inbetween all that
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  • From ashleypenton2 on June 19, 2011
    wow...okay so i totally thought i would hate this story....not because of your writing but just because of the subject and stuff but wow.....i am totally and completely hooked! good job in reeling me in!
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  • From juanjoseso on June 13, 2011
    people are idiots making ginny a disgusting dyke just because they hated her being harry I love how deathly hollows ending and july 15 is d day that ginny haters will cry out that they didn't get what happen and guess what I love that her and harry never broke up in the last two movies it's good for all those ginny haters and crazy fan boys and fan girls of hermione to suffer I'm glad theirs not that many idiots who hates the books and movies and those freaks forcing their kids not to read book 6 and 7 just because their cry baby parents didn't get what they wanted
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  • From Xeronose on June 10, 2011
    So far so good I only read the fist chapter but I like it when there is a story on this site that actually has a story not just costent sex(not that that is a bad thing :D) hope to be entertained by the rest of the story. Sorry if i miss read at the end of the first chapter you wrote.

    "Hermione, her spirits lifted for a moment, wished she could be a fly on the wall when the woman was told that not only was Draco dead, but the Malfoy name was destroyed as well."

    But wasn't Mrs Malfoy at the will reading earlier you wrote.


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  • From ChaosLady on June 10, 2011
    I realized you haven't updated this in awhile but I started reading this from the beginning: I just haven't been able to review until now. It's a wonderful plot. I don't mind the pairings, but what I don't like is that Harry has to rape Tonks all the time. Not a big fan of the Non-con. I will not be reading anymore.
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  • From bloodshound on June 09, 2011
    woah, talk about life getting flushed down the crapper. i had a thought on the Bones prob. If Harry has his meta shift to a male susan and knock susan up... or Sue designates someone as heir... something along those lines
    also, is there a way for Harry to stop treating tonks like crap?
    btw, welcome back. ^^
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  • From snichol98 on January 02, 2011
    Cmon--dont end the story here--we need to hear how Harry beat the crap outa Moldishorts and then beats Dumblemort
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  • From on December 14, 2010
    You are a sadistic freak. . .but I love it!!! I hope you update soon.

    All my love The Maiden Lyra
    maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
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  • From snichol98 on November 19, 2010
    Nice Job on this one--is there going to be more? Continue--you are doing an excellent job
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  • From serpentlady on November 09, 2010
    Umm. . . after making sure I got the decimals right, I laughed at how much money Harry has. The WORLD GDP (how mucgh money is made everywhere, all together, in one year) is around $53 trillion US. Harry has $547,215 trillion POUNDS. Just pointing it out. I am taking it in the spirit of humour and inconceivability.
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  • From kkwatson on October 25, 2010
    Love the story.
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  • From MASilverwolf on August 01, 2010
    [jabs a thick needle into your arm and injects the synthetic hormone inside into you] You did say you needed a shot of adrenaline, right? [looks sheepish] Oh...the story. So sorry.

    Mechanically, you use the wrong word for things several times. It's mostly mixing up the "your"s and the "there"s. You know what I mean: the pesky duo of possessive "your" and contraction "you're" and the annoying trio of possessive "their", contraction "they're" and location "there". It's a common problem that a lot of people have. It also doesn't get picked up by a spelling and grammar check--meaning you have to look for them the old fashion way. Which I know from experience is tedious.

    Also mechanically, you tell a lot in your story rather than showing. In some incidences, I understand this. You're wanting to gloss over it a bit while giving just enough details for the audience to understand your characters. But others--like the sex scenes and character introductions--would do well with a bit of added description. When you just say the barest details of a character, trusting that we know them from the canon, the audience misses out on your interpretation of the character's appearance and mannerisms. This is your story. I reading it because I want to see the characters through your eyes.

    Thematically, I like what you have so far. You have interesting ideas about how the characters would act and interact. While you do ignore certain aspects of the canon characterization, you also explain why they are acting differently for the most part. (And as I stated above, if I wanted strictly canon, I'd read the books...fanfiction though the last couple were...)

    I don't think slash would really work with how you have Harry in this story. That was a source of victimization for Harry, his lowest point. I don't think he'd seek that again. The only possible way I can see you working it in and still keeping true to your character, is for it to be a revenge fuck against Dudley. I really don't think Harry would go after Neville. (Though there is the interesting possibility of Harry sharing a witch with Neville...a reward perhaps, for loyal service?)

    Well, I need to get. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next installment!

    ~M.A.S

    (P.S. If the html doesn't work, I'm sorry for littering the review with it.)
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