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By : tsorg
  • From dragongirl on August 17, 2009
    This one is certainly very good... Especially the fight for dominance... well done! More please...
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  • From BeaBibliophile on August 17, 2009
    Chapter Five: *takes a small bow* I did win! Though, the victory is bittersweet, considering I've already lost 10 points. I maintain that I was well within the parameters set forth at the beginning of the match; a kick is not a punch. Unfortunately, Guy wouldn't be swayed. *grumbles* Be sure to vote!

    Now onto the review... Lucius is a pushy thing! I know that's what the prompt was, though, and consider it quite an accomplishment that you've convinced me to lust after the man even though he's so bossy. I love that you threw Aurora in there. I picture her just like you do: voluptuous and sexy and lusting after Slytherin-types. A bit of a cliffie there at the end, Madam T. How very wicked of you! This was a lovely, sexy chapter, and I'm eager for more.

    Bea

    Postscript: That post-fight story about LaBib was superb! I really enjoyed it...
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  • From voraciousreader on August 17, 2009
    AS much as I loved the byplay, if she doesn't want to be steamrollered, she does need to dig in her heels a bit. Lucius is often too used to getting his own way; a bit of creative opposition would be good for him. Loved the new chapter.
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  • From margaritama on August 16, 2009
    LORD that man is persistent...I think I was melting everytime he said "little girl." Wait, I need to wipe the drool.

    I love his take no prisoners course of action. Hermione has NO idea what she's in for.

    PS: I am a tart....and proud of it. 'Scuse me, I've got to find the nearest library's secluded corner.
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  • From voraciousreader on August 14, 2009
    Did I mention that I've had that marvelous visual of Lucius in the library in my head for two days and can't get rid of it? Not that I'm complaining, mind you. Just had to let you know that your descriptions are nearly damn perfect!
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  • From kitty08 on August 12, 2009
    great story and I love it!! I wonder what Lucius next step will be to secure Hermione to him... please update soon!!!
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  • From BeaBibliophile on August 11, 2009
    Chapter Four: Oh, yummy. That was a very hot chapter, Madame T, very sexy. I love how Hermione just loses herself and then afterwards, has a bit of a panic attack at the thought of what she's just done. And Lucius's manipulation is exquisitely done, i.e. I don't resent him for it.

    Bea
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  • From alecto on August 11, 2009
    spank scene = exceptionally well done. good description of movement with that leather belt!
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  • From dragongirl on August 11, 2009
    There is no better frase to it OH Glorious Smut!!!! Thank you for writing it ! I love Draco and Hermione as my first choise but this two certainly are getting a pretty good spot.. LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2009
    Oh how very yummy this is. I can't wait to see where this goes. I also can't wait to see how hard Hermione fights Lucius.
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  • From Coipje on August 11, 2009
    of course it did
    And this one to :)

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  • From leValkyrie on August 11, 2009
    I wonder if anyone heard them in the library. I mean I'm betting Hermione was kind of loud. I mean, hell, I would be if I was in that situation. Could you imagine being in the library then hearing that? Would you listen or run away? If it was Lucius, I would listen, watch, and try to join in LOL! I don't understand why she was trying to run from that. That was hot! A little voyeurism to end the day, you know what I'm saying? lol. Great update. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next update!
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  • From margaritama on August 11, 2009
    OMG - I LOVE library scenes....that was so HOT and delicious. Her reluctance to just fully submit contradicting with her actual physical submission. And Lucius so in control, calm and self-assured that he'll get her no matter what....my on my what a wonderfully cocky master (pun intended).

    My fave line: "He sat up, looked about his bedroom and to his annoyance found nary a curl in sight." There's something wickedly funny about him looking for moving curls attached to a little witch in his room.
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  • From katiekrm on August 11, 2009
    This chapter made me want to renew my library pass. I will never look at a book cart the same way again. I am glad he approached her so gently. I loved that he asked if he could escort her to the Great Hall. Such a gentelman. I LOVED your fic Diamond in the Rough. It was one of my all time favorites.
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  • From voraciousreader on August 11, 2009
    Man, I hope he cast a silencing charm or some kids are gonna be traumatized! LOL, my library time was never so much fun, damn it.
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