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Reviews for Shadow Play

By : YokoBlack
  • From thrnbrooke on February 15, 2010
    Chapter 10!!!! I soooooo need more!!!
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  • From serenagold on February 11, 2010
    meow baby! yeah!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 29, 2010
    Soooooo need chapter 9!!!!
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  • From serenagold on January 29, 2010
    Drama!!! Stalker ex-boyfriend from the Broadway days!!!! Eek!~! Trouble.


    Also, you seriously need to lay off the spell checker and go to the forums to hook up with a Beta. That or re-read your stories out loud before publishing them. Spell check is all well and good, but it doesn't always correct properly and if there is a missing word or a word spelled wrong, but spelled correctly for some other word, it won't pick it up. There were a lot of errors in this chapter to the point that I had to re-read sentences to figure out what word was missing or replaced by something else. (example: "him" instead of "house")

    Other than that, excellent chapter. I always enjoy updates for this story. Keep up the good work.
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  • From RedEntrapy on January 28, 2010
    I love this story. I enjoy the change in the relationship between Draco and James 'Harry'. I love how he loves teasing him that's how I always see them. Anyways best wishes.
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  • From Toddy on December 12, 2009
    There is a town called 'Hell' in Norway too. It has a railway station so you can catch a train tho Hell if you wish to.

    Enjoying the story, looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 08, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 8!!!
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  • From serenagold on December 07, 2009
    lol

    I did not know that about Michigan and Arizona, although I can imagine. ^^

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From kittehnekokat on November 10, 2009
    I like this story so far, especially the way that Harry torments Draco. It makes me laugh ^_^ Did you know that chapter 6 and 7 are the same?
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  • From draydramer on October 31, 2009
    hey! love your story !!!ausome caracters and very interesting plot!!!!!
    just wanted to point out that you posted chapter 6 twice:P
    p.s. PLEASE update sooner:))) cant wait to see Harry-jAMES finaly get with Draco :))
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  • From Cloud646 on October 31, 2009
    think there was an error or something, chapter 6 and 7 are the same.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 23, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From angelicneko21 on September 16, 2009
    This is amazing, and phenomenal I hope you keep up the good work
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  • From serenagold on September 16, 2009
    I love this story.

    Also, Harry can't run. He has school obligations now. Hehehe.
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2009
    Sorry I have to say this... do you have a good beta? Because I think you might need one... to be honest, I stopped reading after the first few paragraphs. I'd like to read more, but probably won't do if you don't get a beta read... The first part is promising, so far
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