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By : ScorpioPhoenix
  • From thrnbrooke on March 23, 2010
    Sooo need chapter 11!!! Hope Harry knows what he's doing!
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  • From ANON - Lexi on March 23, 2010
    Slow? Scorpio you crazy. This was fantastic!
    I am so torn about this story. One hand I really want Harry and Draco to end up together but on the other hand, every time they seem to be making progress towards that resolution I get queasy and wish for Charlie! And I almost teared up at the Charlie and Alex part. You are so talented at creating palpable emotions with few words. And you are the first author to make me almost not want an H/D ending. Okay, I have come up with a solution to my dilemma (more like wishful-hoping on a shooting-star-type-thing): If Harry and Draco do end up together, have a side story with Alex and Charlie reconciling OR do a new Draco/Charlie story or both lol . Even a side note that just says "and Charlie lived happily and romantically ever after with..." will do. I just want Charlie to be happy! He came in less than halfway into the story and suddenly became my favourite (though Draco is a close second).
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  • From ANON - Queen of the Darkness on March 23, 2010
    Bravi! Bravi! Love it! I admit it, I cried. :) OMG Fabulous! Do I sense second chance? Maybe more than one... :)Waiting anxiously for the next chapter! There are no words...just amazing. Can't wait!
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  • From mriypromene on March 22, 2010
    Delicious!!!
    Oh, Charlie...that part was heartbreaking, especially seeing as Alex was on his way to recovery with Evan by his side. Love your writing.
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  • From ANON - serilla on March 22, 2010
    OMG! Such a great chapter. Harry what are you doing? He more or less remembers his life with Draco but now because of that stupid promise he made to Ginny (to never hurt or leave her again) it looks like they'll never get back together. I'm in two minds now about if I want them back together - the romantic side says yeah forget everything that has happen and let Harry and Draco get their happy ever after but the revenge side says make Harry suffer for what he has done to Draco. Can't wait to see what you decide. Poor Charlie and Alex - I feel really sorry for them. Hope they can work everything out. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 15, 2010
    They are all stupid! Sooo need chapter 10!!!
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  • From ANON - Kelli on March 12, 2010
    Love it!
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  • From ANON - Risa on March 09, 2010
    OMG!!!!! You have me on SUCH tenderhooks. Between the way Harry's all confused, and Malfoy's forcing himself to live/move on...... It's an incredible story!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - serilla on March 08, 2010
    Another great chapter. Really don't know how this story is going to pan out (which is totally great). First there is Draco who still loves Harry but is determine to move on. Second there is Harry who is starting to remember his life with Draco but who has promise Ginny no matter what that he wants to be with her and will never hurt her again and then there is Charlie broken up with his long time boyfriend - somehow I think it's going to be very hard for anyone to get what they want. Will Harry despite everything stay with Ginny even when he realises he does not love her? Does Charlie still love his boyfriend or is he ready to move on? Can Draco still really want to be with Harry after everything that has happen and does he have any true feelings for Charlie? For me I rather see Draco and Charlie together and Harry with Ginny (totally mean I know but Harry never gave Draco a chance, just jump straight back to Ginny not even caring about Draco or Dean and if Harry does get back with Draco, Dean should not get back with Ginny after she dump him so quick) What is Flint going to do? And is Pansy going to interfere more?. Can't wait to find out all the answers to my questions. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Lexi on March 08, 2010
    I am upset with Draco for using Charlie. Charlie is such a nice man and for Draco to be using him to get back at Harry is just... I mean, if he really does feel something for Charlie then fine. He isn't with Harry anymore so he has a right to be with anyone he chooses. He does still love Harry, yes, but either he needs to accept that there will be nothing between them and move on with good intentions! Or, he needs to stop this thing with Charlie because that isn't fair to him.

    And Harry! I feel bad for him. No one truely gets what he himself had to deal with. Everyone sort of took Draco side from the beginning. It is no wonder he did everything in his power to distance himself from the blond. But Harry did everything wrong by breaking up Ginny and Dean for his own selfish means. Now look what is happening, he is remembering! Argh, the entire situation just sucks for everyone involved.

    And for some reason, despite my undying love for everything Harry/Draco, I wouldn't be too bothered if Draco ends up with Charlie =/

    The madness must stop!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 07, 2010
    about #9...

    Man! I felt like I was on a rollercoaster...Ron was irritated with
    Draco, Hermione was shocked by Draco's prescence, Bill & George were
    unsure of what to do, Charlie was trying to keep nuetral, Ginny was
    feeling like the 'odd-man-out', and Harry was like 'what-tha'-hell!'

    This was good. ^__^

    Oh, you had me laughing on that flamers comment.
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  • From ANON - Queen of the Darkness on March 06, 2010
    OMG! Getting deep! Love it! It gets better every chapter! I really hope Harry and Draco work things out. There's a lot I realize but after everythng, they need the happy ending. :) Love the plot twist with Charlie...brilliant! I can't wait to see how it all plays out, though I'll be sad when it's over. I love it! It's excellent. Looks to have a place as a must read of HD stories lists.
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  • From ANON - umm.. on March 06, 2010
    Draco's such a slut and a cheat. He claims to love Harry with all his heart and he's giving his body to all those men. nasty
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  • From TouchoftheWind on March 06, 2010
    Great update- I can't help but wonder what Flint will do- maybe the whole Charlie thing will push Harry over the edge and go and confront Draco- and maybe at the time Flint is hitting on Draco...
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  • From ANON - blur on March 06, 2010
    Is Draco really going to have sex with Charlie? What happen to Charlie's boyfriend? What makes them break off? Poor Charlie......
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