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By : ScorpioPhoenix
  • From TouchoftheWind on February 11, 2010
    I can't help but hope that Pansy will actually try to help Draco and Harry get back together- if Harry gets jealous in the process- brilliant! I love Pansy and Draco's interaction- very well written and amusing. Glad Draco is recovering like he is... possible CharlieDraco...hmm very good...can't wait for more...

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  • From MightyGryffindor on February 11, 2010
    I have to agree with everyone about Harry. I'm sorry to say that I have no pity sake for somebody like that. I pity him for losing his memory, but I do not pity him over being a stubborn asshole. If I had been there, I would have personally kicked his scrawny ass, Auror or not, and I wish that Dean had. It may have jarred his stubborn brain into remembering.

    Now, I have a suggestion for Pansy's revenge. Curse the little bastard so he can't get an erection around any woman, and if he tries to get the least bit intimate with one, such as a kiss, or even as much as hug one, make him get violently ill and vomit on them. Also, I hope that Pansy has a little talk with Ginny.

    The one's I truly feel sorry for is Dean, Draco, and the baby over what has happened. Ginny deserves what she gets for allowing Harry to do what he did in the first place, and saying she would take him back, while dumping Dean. Thus, I hope the little bitch gets her just deserts. Maybe Pansy can do a two-for-one deal here and curse them both?

    Anyhow, this is a very good story so far, and it is a breath of fresh air to read a new story, where the author actually knows how to write, instead of some of the sorry trollop that's posted on these sites. Continue the good work!
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  • From ANON - Jolene on February 11, 2010
    I will not be so crude as to threaten anyone, but seriously? People don't want Harry and Draco to get back together?!?!?! Are you kidding me? I'm dying for the pair to finally work all this out! Aka, I will be a very upset reviewer if they don't get back together eventually.

    Charlie as a catalyst to make Harry aware of how he really feels about Draco is brilliant. I can only hope Pansy knows what she's doing, and doesn't take it too far.

    You originally said the story would be 11-12 chapters long. Is that still true? Can't wait for the next update.

    P.S. I wanted to cry when Harry started touching Ginny. Please don't make us readers suffer such a travesty again!
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  • From evanone on February 11, 2010
    Charlie would be good for Draco. I would like to see Harry's reaction
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  • From Juana13 on February 11, 2010
    man, is Pansy an evil genuis or what? hahahahaha I actually like her in this story.
    Maybe if Draco get with Charlie, it might open Harry's eyes a bit, hm? Maybe then he'll realize that he loves Draco again. Ugh, Harry pisses me off, but I do feel a bit tad bad for him since he's the one who lost his memory and all. Still, Draco is my fave character of this. I hope those two still end up together somehow......
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  • From ANON - serilla on February 11, 2010
    Such a great chapter. Must admit I'm one of those readers that doesn't want Draco to get back with Harry now that Charlie is on the scene. Harry has promised Ginny he won't ever hurt her again....... so maybe he deserves to get his memories back only to be stuck with Ginny while Draco finds love with Charlie. Looking forward to see where you take this. :)
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  • From ANON - Jess on February 11, 2010
    I am really enjoying your story and can't wait to see what Pansy has up her sleeve!! Keep up the amazing work and update as soon as possible...I'm dying to know what's going to happen already!!
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  • From ANON - ice on February 11, 2010
    Heheheh. I wished this chapter was longer! It was positivly delicious! Charlie and Draco?!? I must say I quite like this turn of events. But I'm just itching with anticipation for Harry to come to his senses. But I feel he's going to have to work at it. But anywho. Another great chapter. And I hope you won't wait so long to update. :D
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  • From YaoiFanWriter on February 02, 2010
    I like this story I can't wait to read more of it
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2010
    This is a great story! I love the plot and I love the dialogue! I hope Draco accepts Harry back into his life and I hope Harry makes an effort to really understand Draco's needs and try to remember his love for Draco. This story is amazing! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From TouchoftheWind on January 26, 2010
    Brilliant update- very powerful...
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 26, 2010
    about#7....

    Actually, you got it right in this chapter. Whatever you were
    feeling carried through correctly in this chapter and expressed
    whatever everyone was feeling at the right time.

    Sometimes if you're feeling frustrated and writing is your outlet,
    the best thing to do is to just go ahead and right all your frustrations
    out first, then once that's done...try to write a beginning to meet the
    middle and go from the middle to write a good ending.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 26, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 8!!! Oh Cassie! Work your magic!!!
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  • From Juana13 on January 25, 2010
    poor draco and poor harry
    what else can those two go through?
    i really hope harry remembers soon or something. this story is so heartbreaking, it's leaving me in tears *sob*
    hope you update this story soon. I am really loving it. it's so sad...
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  • From ANON - jadestonedreams on January 25, 2010
    another wonderfully written chapter.

    I hope that doctor doesn't try something evil.
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