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Reviews for la persistencia de la memoria

By : ScorpioPhoenix
  • From ANON - serilla on January 05, 2010
    Arrgghh!!!!! What a cliff hanger. Such a great story - poor Draco. Harry is such an arse - if he would just listen and see what he is doing to Draco. He so got total tunnel vision. If he loved Ginny as much as he remembers why did he ever break up with her in the first place - he really needs to get his head out of his arse and think about that. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 05, 2010
    OMG!!! No!!!! Someone save Draco!!!!! I soooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From ANON - omnni on January 03, 2010
    Poor draco. Hope to find out if they get out before the fire gets rest of the house.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 02, 2010
    about #5...

    Okay, have you ever heard of the saying about, ''..it's
    like watching a bad accident, you can't turn away from it..''?

    That's Harry & Draco's life right now.

    The bodies are thrown all over place, the souls have left and
    you're hoping they see the light at the end of the tunnel.

    ...and that's the feeling I got from this chapter. O_o

    Bottom line, you're doing a GREAT job!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on December 31, 2009
    I'm glad this is still going, because I do want to see the final conclusion.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 31, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From oskalaboska on October 20, 2009
    Dude, I love this story.

    As much as I hate to say it, I'm actually happy that Draco has gotten out of this maudlin phase that he was in. Yeah, I rather him not go out and screw the first thing he meets but I can honestly sympathized with Draco. But then, he has those crazy hormones still running through his head and seeing the man he loved (ans was happy with a month ago) with someone else, along with the other shocks to his system, its kinda understandable that he's not really thinking clearly. I noticed he's not bonding with the baby. You explained it a little but mostly it seems to be postpartum depression (which I went through. It's horrible). I am said that he spoke of separating Harry and Cassi but once again, I can sympathize with him and pray that later he'll remove himself from his haze of angry and make Harry pay in more subtle ways (maybe that's why he's at the club).

    As someone else said earlier, Harry is such a insensitive bastard. And the fact that Ron and Ginny are acting as enablers is horrid. For me, I hate Harry more than anyone. I hope that the reason he's acting this way is because he is lost and trying to find something to anchor on to but he's not really trying to face reality (or the present). Seriously, how do you go to the house with your pregnant spouse and start spouting that you're getting back together with your ex and expect them to act calmly.

    One thing I will say is that I've rarely read a story where I feel sorry for Ginny. She's pitiful for pining after a man who dumped her. For another man. For FIVE YEARS. She's pitiful for dropping someone that not a week earlier she had planned to spend her life with. For someone who, during that same time, was happy with someone who wasn't her. And the this get together is based on the fact that the guy lost his memory. I had hope that the girl would have some sense and have chosen Dean but its obvious that she's still the silly bint who sang back Valentine's day songs.

    Also, about you copying someone's idea, I laughed at that. As old and large as the Harry Potter fandom is, I would think that whomever it was would have recognized that there really isn't much that hasn't been covered. Jinko is not the first one to write about mpreg and amnesiac (just one of the better authors) and give that both your and his/her story comes from the same source (JKR)naturally some similiarities are to be expected. So really don't take it to heart. Personally, I think most writers like the idea that thier story would inspire someone else to write one, but maybe that's my own bias speaking.

    Hope you don't mind the long review (I had 4 chapters to cover). I await the next chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 17, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 5!!! Isn't there anything anyone can do to help? They are both destructing!!!`
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 15, 2009
    about #4...

    Who in the world accused you of taking someone's story idea???

    You'd have to live under a rock and not know about the other
    MPreg stories that are out there or too lazy to check the other
    pages and to see if there ARE other MPregs to read, which DO
    have similarities. Something that can't be helped nowadays.

    I like your different spin on the MPreg genre, it's rare to see
    a Draco..or Harry..whose bitterness towards their significant
    other affects the treatment of their child.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on October 14, 2009
    I think Draco has the right idea, after all Harry's basically dumped him so if they ever get back together than Harry can't complain.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2009
    Yeah!! You finally updated! Man this story is amazing. I love your writing and the plot! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - serilla on October 14, 2009
    Aarrgghhh!Harry is such an arse- I just want to smack him. Can't he see what he is doing to Draco? Poor Draco - suffering depression - not good. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on October 14, 2009
    This is not going to end well. I hope that the Doctor is right and Cassi will be able to help both of her parents out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2009
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Don't make Draco into a slut. How can he ever get w/ Harry if he does something like that.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 04, 2009
    about the story...

    First, I think I've read other stories by you in the past, but it's
    been awhile, like ...the Wedding? Pretty good. :-)

    Second, I don't CARE that Harry has lost his memory, he's given
    the term 'insensitive bastard' a WHOLE new meaning! That's totally
    unlike him.

    Third, I positively adore the baby already and it's a GIRL! You hardly
    see MPreg stories where they have a girl, so this was a pleasant surprise!

    Fourth, the name title...it does mean, 'persistant memory', right?
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