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Reviews for Soldier's Welcome

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2009
    More... That was good... I want more. Now. ^^
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  • From alleycat88 on September 25, 2009
    Ooooo! I absolutely adored that chapter. I love when Harry realized that he trusted Draco and then kissed him passionately.....Ok so that's not how it went but it was awesome nonetheless. Excellent chapter!
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  • From ANON - acacia on September 25, 2009
    This chapter was powerful! How did the red & black magic get into DeChancie? Was he just a shell containing it or did it form when he tried to answer the question? Draco is going to have a hard time explaining this whole situation, I think. and the phrase you used to describe DeChancie's body: "forsaken skin" is awesomely descriptive and would make a cool band name lol.
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  • From icedragonbreath on September 24, 2009
    Good chapter. I like how Harry realized Draco had to pull the magic in. I found it funny that Draco really didn't like Harry's simple instructing on wanting the magic to do want he wants instead of actual instructions.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on September 24, 2009
    Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the chance. Well done!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 24, 2009
    This Nihil business is very interesting! Very original, especially in terms of the different types of magic. Very intriguing!
    Keep going!
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  • From callistianstar on September 24, 2009
    I'm not sure why I haven't read anything about lacing Veritaserum in food before, but I liked that. Nihil is sounding more interesting, so far as a bad guy that just wants chaos for the sake of chaos. Also liked the description of what happened there to DeChancie at the end.
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  • From SpearsTwlight on September 24, 2009
    Whoa! What a way to leave up hanging!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on September 23, 2009
    In the last scene when you describe the red and black ribbons coming out from hiding, I almost immediately pictured the boogieman from 'The Nightmare Before Christmas.' How humorous. Never the less, thank you for updating this wonderful story once more, please do so again when you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 22, 2009
    about#17...

    You know, I need to start watching out for you, when you decide to
    throw disturbing, mental images at 'innocent' lil' lambs, like me.
    Oh hush...don't get smart. :-p

    As for your Mr. 'Mentioned Indirectly' Mystery Man, if you're talking
    unusual spells, freaky illusions, and ''Wanna-Be-But-Flunked-the-Class''
    Deatheaters, then oh...okay.

    To clarify something, when you say 'Harry will grow up', are you
    talking just emotionallly, physically or both?

    Last, but not least, am I getting my duel soon?

    ..and how was your week?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2009
    Pretty exciting chsapter! And at least Draco's already realising he wants more than friendship...
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  • From icedragonbreath on September 22, 2009
    Yes I mean
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  • From ANON - js on September 22, 2009
    This is a great plot. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From MiraMira on September 22, 2009
    haha, I love how draco just watches for a second. "oo, red and black look kinda cool together" attitude-esqu. I know that's not his mindset, it's just that would probably have been mine.....*shuts up*
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  • From ANON - polka dot on September 21, 2009
    hmm it is all rather confusing. I do wonder just what is going on
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