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Reviews for Soldier's Welcome

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From icedragonbreath on August 31, 2009
    I have to say that Ron is being written as Ron would act in the books. He's self conscious and selfish but still Harry's friend in the end.

    I like that Draco still gets surprised by what Harry can do and know.

    So Draco was asking about how Harry pulled engery from him and not what the spell was, right?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 31, 2009
    about #10...

    *singing* Your story is li-ke a drug! And I gotta have iiiiittt!!!*end singing*
    *********

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  • From SpearsTwlight on August 31, 2009
    "Ah Fuck" lol loved that, urgh please kill Ron hes annoying! Thanx 4 the update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2009
    Sleepy!Draco is cute, Cliffhanger is evil.
    I only hope Harry and Draco don't become to smug. Even their magical power is limited, as we've seen. Isn't it quite dangerous to pair them together so that they get used to their compatible magic? If one of them is injured or killed the other will suddenly have to deal with the loss of his power.

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  • From alleycat88 on August 31, 2009
    I just love how you wrote the part where Draco convinces Harry to partner with him, almost as if he were convincing him to date him after having a one night stand and realizing how wonderful it was. They wanted more and with a little help from Draco, Harry realized he did too. But what are Deatheaters doing here?! and I cannot wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on August 30, 2009
    A spell that makes the 'castee's dreams come true eh? Imaginative and possibly addicting. Top notch job this chapter! Please update once more when you have the time.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 30, 2009
    If the death eaters are other trainees than they should be was well-equppied or better than Potter since he's a new recruit. It seemed too easy.
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  • From ANON - Tree802 on August 30, 2009
    Oh wow...Im actually relieved! I felt all tense after the last chapter because they weren't getting along. It's interesting to hear Draco be so resonable...i wish you would include more of what he's really thinking, similar to the begining of the story. I found myself a little wary of his intentions...or maybe that's how it is supposed to be? Either way, interesting! Nice cliffhanger.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 30, 2009
    ack and here i thought that draco might kiss harry *pouts*
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  • From Lillybe on August 30, 2009
    Oooh, what is Ginny firecalling Harry about??
    Poor Draco being weakened by Harry, hope that doesn't cause problems.
    I like the story and cannot wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - nn on August 29, 2009
    wow .......
    i love this story, i can't wait to see another chemistry between harry and draco
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 27, 2009
    about #9...

    Man, there's nothing more dangerous than a bunch of educated ole'
    fuddy-duddy's making plans for your life & then expect you to roll
    over and take it. Very irritating....regardless of the situation.

    Not much to say except, I definitely feel where Draco is coming from.
    How frustrating it is to be linked with someone who wishes NOT to
    acknowledge it, because they are concerned with Mr. Childishly Selfish!

    But, hopefully, Draco can, in a roundabout way, convince Harry that it IS
    a good idea to partner with him, especially if he makes it seem like it
    was Harry's idea.

    But, you'd have to change up what you've got plotted out, right?

    ...and yes, my email 'bounced to the ounce' [an old R&B reference] right
    back to me. IS your email full???
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  • From icedragonbreath on August 27, 2009
    Interesting... Probably too soon to see them training with other pairs and seeing if their can compare with more well training pairs.

    With Harry being pulled in so many directions, it's going to be hard for Draco to understand him.... if Draco can ever. But at least Draco can use this to show off how he can stand out. In a good way. Harry has to defend himself from the forces trying to kill them, the instructors, Ron and Draco... How is he ever going to graduate?
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 26, 2009
    man you know i love harry but is it just me or is he being a little whiny? and ron? really really needs to just get over it and move on
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 26, 2009
    I'm shocked Hermione isn't wanting to research the red and black ribbons. Maybe she doesn't have access to a good library. That' must be hard for her.
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