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Reviews for Soldier's Welcome

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SpearsTwlight on August 09, 2009
    Omg! Ur like my fav author ever! I tink im already hooked to this fic! Pleeez update!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 08, 2009
    about #5....

    I see those two have a lot of work to do as they feel each other out
    and try to see what does or doesn't work, regarding their magic. If I
    was reading this right [I might have to reread this again], were the
    both of them swapping strengths of their powers? Like a boost?

    ALSO, since I can't reach you by 'public' email AT ALL, here's my opinion on
    what I thought were good ideas on what you posted on LJ.

    1. 'Corybantes'...I think would be good as a 8 part story, since with that idea
    you presented you could dig a little deeper in the mystery, without having to rush
    it.

    OR

    2. 'Blooming Narcissus'....did you ever read 'The Monkey's Paw'? I think a
    little in creepiness is in order. The old classic with a twist. Forbidden resurrection where there's something waiting outside the Manor. *cue scary
    music*

    Then again, why not both?
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  • From MiraMira on August 05, 2009
    Ngh, I hate that feeling you get when you're reading the chapters of a fic and then suddenly there aren't anymore to read when you thought there were. All the sudden you have to wait when you thought it would be instant gratification. *sighs*

    well....is there any chance that you have a, oh what's it called, email-notice-group-thing for when you update a chapter? hmmm....


    blah.


    Well, just wanted to let you know that your amazing ability to create a captivating world persists and that I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
    May the muse be with you
    Miranda
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 05, 2009
    Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 04, 2009
    about #4...

    Okay, I've come to the conclusion that...

    a. Ron will be feel slighted like a child, when he finds out what
    Harry is doing for Draco

    AND

    b. This just has to be a test to see if the trainees can figure out
    'whodunit'!!! :-)

    If so, getting there should be part of the fun reading this. ;-p
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on August 03, 2009
    Ohh they're finally realizing their magical compatibility. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops with the plot.

    I'm also very intrigued with Dearborn and how he fits into the story. So exciting.

    Watching for the next update! ^^
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  • From ANON - Blood on the Water on August 03, 2009
    Yes! Awesome! More writing from you! *happy dance*

    Ooh, I wonder what Draco's Patronus will be~! (A ferret?)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 01, 2009
    about #3...

    1. Okay, you know what..Ron is a bad influence on Harry. If you're going to be
    in reinforcement of ANY kind, then YES, you have to work hard. I hope Harry
    realizes that in the future.

    ^___^ Buuuut, I get the feeling you will. Nothing like a so-called best
    friend who'll almost get you killed, during Auror training, because HE
    doesn't want to work.

    2. Damn!!! You made me do the fan-girl SQUEEEEAL!!! :-D You made my dream a reality!!!
    Even though, they weren't fighting together..yet..they DO have the makings
    of the best Aurors together, once they get over petty differences. I can't
    wait to see how you pull THAT one off.

    Because of the simple fact, others have put together Harry & Draco as Aurors,
    of course when Harry was an Auror already, BUT I hope to see you do a different
    spin on it with this story.

    As in...
    ''WHY would you put them together? and WHAT would be the benefit?''

    3. Another thing, PLEASE tell me you have a Auror fight in the works, with
    Harry & Draco side by side. Just give me that much...

    Oh, by the way, just to let you know you're getting better & better at
    doing action scenes and to think when you started, you didn't think you
    could do it. :-)

    Now if ONLY I can get you to do Quidditch. :-p

    4. I don't know about anyone else, but I'm in favor of seeing the story
    develop, before any premature 'sexual' encounters between the two young
    men..and personally, you're pretty good at a ''Slow, simmering burn''
    [or slash] when it comes to sexual attraction.

    Keep it up. ^_^


    PS- Now that I've read over this, that's enough praise for you today.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 01, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 4!!! Letting Hagrid have the hybrid is going to bite Harry in the behind!!!
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  • From ANON - Black Padfoot on July 31, 2009
    Ooh well THAT certainly was an interesting chapter! I wonder where the dark magic is coming from! And the scene with Draco first catching Harry and Ron coming back drunk was certainly entertaining! =D
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on July 31, 2009
    I definitely think it's a good sign Draco is attracted to Harry's magic. A very good sign.

    And who is this Nemo? I can't wait to find out!

    Fantastic chapter once again. ^^
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  • From ANON - Blood on the Water on July 31, 2009
    Just wondering (because you must be getting sick of my abundant praise), if this is preslash.... are you planning on continuing this? Like, after you finish Soldier's Welcome, another story... like The Long-Desired series. I'd be interested to see what you would do.
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  • From starstruck86 on July 31, 2009
    Oooooh! Lovely interaction between Harry and Draco, even if they were fighting dark magic at the time, especially the sunbeam imagery. That did make me smile. :)

    Looking forward to more x
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  • From Juana13 on July 31, 2009
    wow what was that? who would do something like that? well, we'll find out eventually, right?
    oooh, can't wait to read more of the private lessons!! ...that's how you'll get those two together.....alone. : )
    can't wait to read more. hope the next chapter is up soon!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 28, 2009
    about #2...

    Now, THIS is what I'm talking about. Not your typical Auror story where
    EVERYone is immersed in cases already, but learning the trade.

    I liked this chapter where you ACTUALLY get the feeling that *gasp* there
    really ARE other people in the Ministry, besides Kingsley & Scrimgeour [sp]!

    I can't wait to see what have in store for the boys, will Draco excel in
    something else BESIDES potions? I think he would do beautifully in Battle
    Tactics.

    By the way, I like Battle Healer Lopez, I hope I got that position right, at
    first I thought she was African-American..oh well. And the teacher who took
    a-whackin' at Harry's knee, can't think of her name.

    I'm interested to see just where you can go with this, since it IS different.

    You go girl!!! ^_^


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