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By : Lomonaaeren

From 12blue12 on December 09, 2009
meeep >.< cant wait to see how this goes and aw on the harry draco fluff :) ... harry find a friend for draco was kinda funny ... its such a strange concept ... and i bet draco wont appreciate it too much.. i would be kinda offended or maybe he ends up being flattered that harry was thinking about him so much.. who knows... anyway plz update soon1 great chapter!
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From ANON - Sarah on December 08, 2009
Same sarah didnt feel like signing in... awsome chapter... i liked the way you handled harry in this chapter though draco is a little ify hopefuly harry "finds him a friend". cant wait for the next update!
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From thrnbrooke on December 08, 2009
Soooo need chapter 40!!! Neither of them understand the other!
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From ANON - SP777 on December 06, 2009
about #39...

1. Harry & Joanna:

-that was the most REAL & intelligent conversation I've had the
pleasure of reading. :-) ....It was intense on a purely different
level as opposed to what Harry has had to dealt with, concerning
his friends, teachers & Draco.

You ACTUALLY showed a side of Harry that you rarely read
about...a glimpse of the man he could become [with guidance].

..and I bet you weren't even going for that type of scenario.

2.
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From hieisdragoness18 on December 06, 2009
*snickers* honestly draco and ron are such dorks
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From ANON - MewMew2 on December 06, 2009
Thank you for updating once more. Excellent job with this chapter as usual. I agree with Harry on this one, Draco needs some friends/intellectual allies with which he can converse and make observations with at the least.
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From 12blue12 on December 04, 2009
ok ive been putting this story off because i wanted to read it once the trilogy is almost over but i couldnt im so glad! so good so far... love your writng... cant wait for more.... by the way ... commooon... y wasn't any one of teh instructors asked if teh nihil or the other two ppl themselves not just their lackies? :(
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From jakenapier on December 02, 2009
I really enjoy this story, so glad I found it! Thank you!!
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From icedragonbreath on December 02, 2009
Ch38:Yay! Harry stood up for himself and then Draco in two different situations!
I guess Harry should have enough experience to either avoid the jinx altogether or have known how to fall without instruction...
Awe, Draco actually sees Harry as a Hero.
Great chapter!
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From ANON - Mia on December 01, 2009
Beautiful, beautiful, crazy fun. Thank you.

~Mia
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From ANON - SP777 on December 01, 2009
skips over to Lomona's story since it's been updated...
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about #38....

1. A thought just hit me, while 'listening' to Lopez speak, she seems
like a different version of Madam Pompfrey, only tougher...and Ketchum
is another version of Flitwick in a way. Right? Are the instructors like
different versions of the Hogwarts teachers?

2. Also, out of curiousity, WHY is the chapter called 'The Withdrawing'?

3. By the way, are we going to see H & D graduate in second story?

...and Dearborn is STILL a w-nker, unless he redeems himself.

PS-....Draco's Patronus?
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From hieisdragoness18 on December 01, 2009
aww they're getting soo well not gooey with each other but more like a real relationship and draco is of course right about harry
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From ANON - MewMew2 on December 01, 2009
Thank you for updating once again. The line about Joanne in a hover chair added to the 'thought' of her being crippled. When one thinks of a sick person, a hospital bed first come to mind, then a wheelchair. Wheel chairs kind be frustrating to be in, and scary. Due to some complications, i was once unable to walk and was then put into a wheel chair and wheeled out of school in the 11th grade. It was very scary, and ever since then, I'm sort of wary about wheelchairs. Logically, I know that the chair had nothing to do with the incident, but I still get shivers sometimes when I see them. A random note I know, but I thought about it when the last few lines were mentioned. Thanks again for updating, great job as usual.
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From icedragonbreath on November 29, 2009
Ch 36: Nice. Love the snide comment Snape had at the end of the memories. Even when he thinks only Draco will see something, he can't help trash talking Harry.
Ch 37: And just when you think Harry can trust an instructor... he gets jinxed with his back turned.
I love that they got caught! lol. Good chapters.

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From ANON - MewMew2 on November 28, 2009
Interesting. If Nhil's forces have withdrawn from the Ministry, then where are they now taking residence is the question in my mind. Thank you for the scene between Harry and Draco as well, relationship development between them is always nice to read. The awkward moment with Sra. Lopez was quite a humorous one, thank you again for that.
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