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From ANON - SP777 on November 28, 2009
about #37...

1. I said it once I'll say it again, I don't trust Dearborn.
Never have, never will.

2. ...and those moments between Harry & Draco are awesome. :-)

3. Okay, I've already forgot her name, but I'm glad that Auror
instuctor had a bit more tact than the rest and didn't make a
scene when she caught H & D doing the 'tango with tongues'.

4. Question, do you live in the US?
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From hieisdragoness18 on November 28, 2009
well that's a twist! i do however like harry and draco getting closer and closer
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From ANON - SP777 on November 26, 2009
about #36...

Hey, I liked that! It was completely away from the norm for a change...and
an appearance by Snape is always good!

..and yes, I meant a chapter with just the one POV, just to get
inside their heads and know what they really think sometimes.

If you go to DeviantArt, just type your name or type Harry Potter first to get
to that particular section first, THEN your name. :-]
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From ANON - MewMew2 on November 25, 2009
Excellent job. On writing Snape's character, and also on the chapter as a whole. The cave scene was the most vividly pictured scene in my mind out of those featured in the pensive memories, it was very well done description wise. Thank you for posting yet another wonderful chapter. Please do so again when possible.
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From icedragonbreath on November 22, 2009
Ch35: Can I say ouch! about the bracelets?
Poor Harry, such low self-esteem.
That was so sweet at the end.
Good chapter.
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From ANON - SP777 on November 22, 2009
I wouldn't say you've swung too far in Draco's perspective, BUT
it would be nice to see a balance every now and then. Maybe a
POV chapter from both young men every once in awhile?

Before I forget again, did you know folks have done fan art on a
few of your stories? They're on Deviant Art.com...
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about #35...

1. Business for the Fellowship or the Order or whatever it
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From ANON - Mewmew2 on November 21, 2009
The phrase 'take the plunge' came to mind at the last scene of this latest chapter as Draco and Harry 'go in' to view the pensive with Snape's memories in it. Thank you for updating once more, I enjoyed this latest chapter greatly.
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From hieisdragoness18 on November 21, 2009
ooooooohhhhhhhh! i can't wait for the next one!
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From hieisdragoness18 on November 19, 2009
nice battle sequence! and i figured that he might be faking and i really liked the way that harry and draco were united! the part about the fellowship made me laugh
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From icedragonbreath on November 18, 2009
Ch34: Great chapter! Loved the fight and the Harry/Draco moment at the meeting. Not Aarowshot!
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From ANON - MewMew2 on November 18, 2009
Lord of the Rings reference number 2! Thank you for posting once more, as always outstanding job. Continue once more when you have the chance.
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From ANON - Mia on November 18, 2009
The interaction with the professors nearly made me wake my husband with my suppressed laughter. You are genius. Manic, incredible, wholely unexpected genius. Thank you.

~Mia
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From ANON - SP777 on November 18, 2009
about #34....

Now, see THIS is what I'm talking about! A chapter you can sink your
teeth into!

The danger! The excitement! The sweet 'Aww..' tender moments!

Did you get some sleep or something??? ;-P

I liked the 'Take Charge' Harry, lets me know he's not viewed as a
'lump-on-the-log' and CAN take charge! Don't ask where I got that
saying from.

I've always felt that any boy who went through what he did as a child
until his teenaged years has got to have balls of steel. Plus, he has the
potential now to be a GREAT leader with Draco by his side, since
I view Draco with the ability to have the 'level-headedness' to come
up with good strategies, with Slytherin deviousness.

..and yes, I see how Draco feels for Harry. :-)
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From ANON - Tree802 on November 18, 2009
GGGAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
(a sound of frustration and longing wilst I bang my head against my keyboard)
SUCH a good cliffhanger. Oh wow.
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From ANON - SP777 on November 16, 2009
about #33...

1. Ooo...that was unexpected! Do unexpected more!!!

2. You know, I said this a while back and I'll mention it again.

You seem to write through Draco's POV more than Harry's and
even when you DO write through Harry's POV, the focus is
still about Draco.

Like how Harry waxed 'poetically' about Draco's look, as if
he isn't worth such a aristocratic person as Draco.

What about Draco's observations on Harry that isn't a constant
critique on manners or the way he thinks.

How deep does HE feels?

In the meantime, see you in a couple of chapters.
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