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Reviews for Soldier's Welcome

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Dezra on November 09, 2009
    I love this story, but I thought that this was a pre-slash story, I wasn't expecting anything physical to happen for quite some time. Looking forward to more. So much has happened and you haven't been able to let us guess if they are close to the end or not. Are they going to figure it out soon?
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  • From kittehnekokat on November 08, 2009
    SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
    They kissed *happy dance happy dance* Now I demand more. Much more. I am completely addicted to this fic.
    Oh and the wail of disappointment that there wasn't another chapter just made my husband laugh at me.
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  • From icedragonbreath on November 08, 2009
    Chapter 29: Poor Harry, taking out everything on Draco, but still wanting him. And about the ending of the chapter... *blink* *blink*

    Chapter 30: I love how instinctive it has become for them to protect one another. Even with the wall between them.

    Yay! Harry manned up! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Minue on November 07, 2009
    It seems they can not avoid each other any more! Go, Harry!

    Where is Politesse right now? When I first read about that dog, I thought it was some kind of trap. Because it's a cross-breed, isn't it? How do they know somebody did not want Harry to have it? It's something Nemo would do, I think.

    Are there really three, or is that just what Nusquam wants them to think?

    By the way, I admire your updating schedule. It's very nice to see a new chapter of my favourite stories every few days.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 07, 2009

    about #30....

    1. It just occurred to me, ARE you going to clue us in to WHY
    the attacks seem to be towards Harry & Draco?

    ...or are they just magnets for trouble?

    2. Say are we talking big, BIG humongous needle here...or
    your typical medium sized 'there's-no-way-you're-sticking-me
    in-the-butt-with-that!' needle :-)

    3. Oh, nice fighting action there, it's going to get to the point
    you'll have your OWN little Wizard War Battle Scene one
    day to make folks drool with envy! :-)

    But, you have a long way to go.

    and

    4. It's about TIME!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 07, 2009
    You are most welcome. Thank you for posting once again, Draco and Harry Kissing without a constructive purpose, oh the frivolity! Please update once more when possible.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 06, 2009
    I love Harry in this chapter!
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  • From ariathel on November 06, 2009
    !! I love how quickly you update! Such a horrible cliff hanger haha.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 04, 2009
    Well played. I liked how Nusquam's identity (of sorts) is revealed in this chapter, yet her motives kept secret. The interactions between Harry and Draco are real I found myself thinking the other day as real people and wondering about solutions concerning their current relationship to each other. I must admit, it was more than a little scary. Thank you for posting once more, please do so again at your earliest convenience.
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  • From SpearsTwlight on November 04, 2009
    Best cliffes at the worst times lol! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Tree802 on November 04, 2009
    Oh no!!! I hope they stop being stubborn long enough to work together.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2009
    I think it's only natural that they have some issues, both of them stubborn, both dealing with insecurities and Draco still spoiled in many ways. You describe it very well! But they've come a long way already.
    Following this story is fun!
    For the last few chapters, I enjoyed once more the little details, such as the falling stars and the magic Nusquam did just now. Politesse is very cute and a brilliant idea, though I had to smile at her name, because in German "Politesse" means a woman who goes around and deals out parking fine notices, usually in an uniform and with a mean smile.

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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 04, 2009
    i see what you mean about the woman. honestly harry and draco just love to hurt each other don't they? i really like how this is progressing. gettin a lil gross there though.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 03, 2009
    about #29...

    1. Ooo...Ms. 'Shock-Em-Til-Their-Eyes-Bleed' strikes again! There you go AGAIN
    with that imagery. *tsk* Mmmhmm...gotta look out for you fo' sho'!

    2. ...and is it just me or does Draco act like he's grooming Harry
    the way you would groom your future wife??? Sit up straight, chew slowly,
    walk in a calm manner, don't laugh too loud, hide your emotions, be
    presentable, act like you know more than everyone else, etc. ...

    Draco needs to be introduced to that saying, 'Give a little, get a little'
    or something of that nature.

    3. Hey, was I correct in saying that there is possibly a Trinity, instead
    of JUST the one person doing these killings?
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  • From ANON - Mia on November 03, 2009
    I just read this as far as the 29th chapter. It's scary beautiful. The beginning parts bout the Aurory and training reminded me of Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card. I love the intricacy, the latticework of their growing friendship and fumbling misunderstandings. I think that is one of the main things that always shine about your work.

    ~Mia
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