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Reviews for Soldier's Welcome

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - qwerty on October 28, 2009
    Great chapter. I love the gifts that Harry and Draco gave to one another.
    "The words seemed to open a trap beneath him, so that he fell down and down and landed at the bottom of a pit with reality written on the walls" - awesome imagery! Nice that Harry finally realizes who he wants. Now the interesting part is what he's going to do about it!
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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  • From miodrago on October 26, 2009
    omg please, PLEASE let them kiss under those stars!!!
    i'm begging you!
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  • From SpearsTwlight on October 26, 2009
    Interesting chapter cant wait for the next update!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 25, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 27!!!
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  • From ANON - Tree802 on October 25, 2009
    Oh, what a tangled web they are in!! Every time I think it can't get any more complicated, it does.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2009
    I adore your writing so much :) I look forward to every time this story updates. It feels like it could be canon, it's that good.
    I noticed mid-way through chapter 26 that you had a typo--"Draco was comfortable having here there." In reference to Narcissa, ought to be "having her there".
    I'm so impressed with your creativity, I love the star decoration. It's glamorous without being tacky. Very beautiful :)
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  • From callistianstar on October 25, 2009
    Gah. I'm disappointed that Draco got interrupted too, but it was easy to see coming since Harry was already headed that way. I'm not sure if I can guess at this so soon, but it was interesting to find that Nihil might be a female, capable of wandless magic at that. Nice job with this chapter.
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  • From icedragonbreath on October 25, 2009
    I can't wait to see how Harry comes around to manning up.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 24, 2009
    Excellent job! Political intrigue at a party of purebloods, always an interesting read. Thank you for updating in such a timely matter. Please do so again when you can.
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  • From ANON - tamikolee on October 24, 2009
    Hi, great chap, I think what I got from Harry talking to Jarvis is that Nihill, convinces people to maybe be the living dead (for lack of a better word) they somehow get filled with that dark magic. That is why Harry can smell dust on Javis's breath, why few missing people,his followers can carry on their normal life until needed by him. Am I on the right track when it comes to Nihil?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 24, 2009
    about # 26....

    1. The stars descended like a snowfall, breaking out of their
    constellations to form new and glittering ones that puffed apart
    a moment later like the dust from broken glass. Where they touched
    the grass, or appeared to touch the grass, fountains of light arose,
    shuddering and tossing themselves like the manes of beautiful pale horses.

    - Man, I wish I had a visual of that!

    2. Nihil. Nemo. Nusquam

    -okay....it seems like we have a 'trinity' as opposed to one person.
    Talk about a plot that thickens. All in all, it feels like we are
    finally getting somewhere, because I'm starting to get curious to know
    just what it is the boys are up against.

    3. I had a sudden thought, will we see both of them grow older through
    the years as the story progresses?

    Also, I STILL say Draco's patronus should be a peacock.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 24, 2009
    Interesting chapter. I cannot wait to learn more about Jarvis and that dark-haired lady.
    Great job. Keep going!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 24, 2009
    well i have to say that the whole idea of the party's theme was beautiful! and that you really have got me wondering about what will happen next
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  • From callistianstar on October 23, 2009
    I love Draco's way of answering there and his reasons for being partially manipulative. He's doing very well at keeping himself calm given the evidences that Harry needs to think for himself more. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 23, 2009
    about #25...

    Okay, I understand the way Harry thinks at this point, but, about
    Draco, when will we see the serious conversation that he wants to have
    with Harry regarding the 'uneven ground' they seem to be standing on,
    especially regarding past intimate situations.

    Did you get my mail?
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