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Reviews for Moonlight Sonata

By : LydiasTravel
  • From ANON - Josh on November 02, 2009
    Okay. I read your story. I like the idea. But! you really need to work on your transitions. Make them smoother. Don't just hope around it really turns off the excitement. I would also recomend that when remus and harry meet for the first time as lovers that you make it a bit more fluffy. Make it a bit more cutesy. If you catch my drift. But not overly so. Cute with an animal taste to it. Great idea though. Oh also your going to need to develop more of a conlflict. I hope that you have one that you are currently developing. I hope you find good advice in my review. keep up the work.
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  • From niremalfoy on November 01, 2009
    I have just read this again! I have decided that it is my one of my all time favourties! It makes me really horny! I love it! I want my own alpha wolf, lol. I hope this is updated really really really soon. I cant wait to read more.
    Do you email people when you update? If you do I would love to be added to that list.

    Nyre
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  • From wackybat on October 24, 2009
    Really god sory keep 'em cumming. jk.
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  • From ANON - jess on October 19, 2009
    I love this story. Its well written and sexy and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Allie on October 17, 2009
    Please please please update your stories. I love them but you haven't updated in forever!
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  • From MrsCakeAkaJane on October 15, 2009
    this story is hot as hell and i love it please update soon and email me janesmithy@btinternet.com
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 14, 2009
    gah his is getting good! REALLY good, Remus' alpha talk is incredibly sexy! I is mostly ignoring the Mpreg, it's not my thing, but I love the story nonetheless!
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  • From ANON - raineynight on October 13, 2009
    Hey, this story is really amazing! Please, please, please send me an email at raineynight713@gmail.com when you update! I hope you update soon! =D
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  • From ANON - barbara on October 11, 2009
    please update i love how harry is remus mate please write more
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  • From ANON - Solomon on October 11, 2009
    I like this story can I get an alert when the next chapter is ready Thank you
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  • From ANON - S.S on October 09, 2009
    When you going to update I really want to read about Remus and Harry I mean they finally got together you can't leave everyone hanging like that. I hope you update pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseee please please please UPDATE!!!

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  • From ANON - Lil on October 04, 2009
    Please stop holding the next chapter prisoner! I need it, want it, crave it!
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  • From burr on October 03, 2009
    WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! i NEED my fix!!!
    love this story, don't you DARE think about qiting on it!
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  • From CherryBloom20 on October 01, 2009
    You have so got to finish this story! I'm giddy with excitement! HOT DAMN! *HOWL* Keep up the hard work. Peace! :p
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2009
    this is so good please update
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