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By : MementoxMori
  • From serinblackmoon on March 01, 2010
    Let me start by saying welcome back! I'm excited to read the next two chapters!

    Onto my review:

    Chapter 5)
    Pretty sad that Severus and Albus were feeling so bad, but they did deserve it in the end. It wasn't right what they did. The friendship between The Griffindors and Draco is refreshing, it's nice to see that he's grown up a bit and let go of pure-blood rhetoric. It's sweet to see such a gentle friendship between Hermione and Draco specifically. I would have expanded a bit more on their friendships and how they interacted in this chapter just to show how well they meshed and if they trusted each other.

    Chapter 6)
    Snape needs to realize the limits of his strength and recognize the fact that he needs more then just an assistant. It was wise of him to chose Hermione as his assistant for brewing, however treating her callously was wholly unwarranted and not appropriate to the conversation. I would have expounded upon what exactly was wrong with him and why he chose her in this chapter.

    Overall, it was a great 2 chapters and I enjoyed reading them. I wish there were more to read lol.

    Can't wait for the next chapter! Write again soon!


    Lady Serin
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 28, 2010
    I am really glad to see you haven't given up on this story, as I really do enjoy it. I like the quiet, thoughtful Severus and the slightly bolder Hermione. I look forward to seeing the cracks in his armor. :-) Thank you!! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Miss Kitty Snape on February 28, 2010
    Whew! Severus is in a right state of illness to be so cold to Hermione, isn't he? I can't wait to see how he plans to make ammends. ^ ^
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  • From lilashannah on February 28, 2010
    Ah,the wonders of having Lily as a friend..(snort).Short but wonderful chapter.I can't wait to see how he tries to make it up to her.
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  • From Mmoirai on February 28, 2010
    Bravo. I am enjoying this scenario quite well and am looking forward to the next installment. So, there are a few things I am wondering.

    1.)If Dumbledore's death was all an illusion and the students are feeling a bit betrayed (which is only right), why don't they feel the same about Snape still being alive? How did he survive Nagini's attack? Was it planned? Did he know that the students were watching? Or did I miss that part?

    2.) Also, I'm a little surprised that Snape would keep the stirring rods instead of try to return them. I only imagine Hermione would tell him to keep them, but still, I was surprised that he would just automatically keep them knowing that she had intended them as a symbol of appriciation, and farewell upon his grave.

    Anyway, I love the story so far and am practically salavating while waiting for your next chapter.
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  • From lilashannah on February 25, 2010
    I am so glad your back..I am really enjoying this story.So Draco seems to like Hermione.So how is this going to play out?I need to know!lol.
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  • From jessirose85 on February 25, 2010
    This is a great story so far, I hope Draco becomes like a brother to her xxx
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  • From voraciousreader on February 24, 2010
    I always rather missed this one--welcome back!
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  • From ANON - emer from ireland on September 24, 2009
    Please update this story its really good!!!
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  • From Bluedragon5544 on September 20, 2009
    I just got done reading all 4 chapter of this story and I was crying while I was reading the 3rd chapter at the scene between Snape and Hermione. I wonder if Harry,Ron,and Hermione will ever forgive Dumbledore. looking forward to the next chapter to see what will happen next. update when you can.
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  • From julieqt2 on September 16, 2009
    I cried all the way through all four chapters. Those are powerful words you've written. Thankyou.
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  • From ANON - Tenar10r on September 08, 2009
    Whoa! Serious chapter! I liked it a lot
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  • From sirimionefan85 on September 08, 2009
    Aww. Interesting story. Good job. Update again soon.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 08, 2009
    BRAVA!!!! That explanation was great! And, your explanation of each of their feelings was beautifully done. I applaud you and look forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From lilashannah on September 08, 2009
    Wow! hell of a good chappy.Can't wait for more so hurry up and post..lol
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