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Reviews for Hermione Granger and the wishing stone

By : fatedsoul
  • From nitesfool on December 03, 2011
    OMFG!!!!! u cannot stop there!!!! whats ur normal update schedule.... i MUST know what happens next!
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  • From CafeAuLait on December 01, 2011
    Sigh, you really jumped the shark with that last chapter. I mean, wow, talk about contrived. I REALLY try to give constructive criticism but it's hard after reading plot driven work. That last chapter was a mess, a real mess, and it's sad that it ruined this entire story for me. It KILLED the story. I don't care if Harry is supposedly under the imperious curse or some other, potion or spell, it is beyond my understanding as a writer, why you chose to put that scene there? There was no build up to the event, no tension, and if Harry isn't under a potion or spell it's ridic that one minute Harry seems to be growing and then out of nowhere he's violating Hermione. Try telling character driven stories, they will give you the pay off you want in the end without resulting to cheap fandom, shock value plot devices.

    Constructive: If you were hell bent on Harry raping Hermione you should have spent more time developing the character so that the reader could have had an emotional connection to the character. I really wanted to feel bad for Hermione, but I struggling to understand what I was reading.
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  • From Recordkeeper on November 29, 2011
    HOLY CHEESE!!!!! That plot twist came out of no where!! I am honestly waiting here with baited breath wanting to see how that works out. I honestly hope its just a dream. Really, Harry went insane? Its almost too tragic. After everything they did to make the world a better place Harry still gets a crappy ending. I hope this has a happy ending. Wonderfully written as always. I always look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - SarahWhitman on November 29, 2011
    Tell me, tell me, tell me PLEASE that this story has Happy Ending Insurance?! Because after the disgusting, revolting, horrible, awful, terrible events from that last chapter, I'm not sure I can hold out. And Harry's wand had better be tested to show the Auror's what happened!!! And while it IS kinda in Hermione's best interest that she not remember... :( And I would LOVE to see James come down on Harry. It'd be GREAT.
    Totally threw me off with the title change but if this means more fic for us in the future....eh, I can handle it. ;)
    Hoping for a reply and an update soon!
    ;) SW
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  • From ANON - Yesenia on November 27, 2011
    I liked the old title! Anyways, I just can't wait to discover what secret Draco.has! This is a really good story!!! Please update soon
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  • From CafeAuLait on November 25, 2011
    YAY, I was so happy to see this was updated. I wish Hermione didn't feel so...odd around Harry, and I REALLY hope he only wants to talk. Although he can be a bit of a jerk, I actually like Harry.

    It's past time for Draco come out with the truth. He should never give anyone the power over him that he's given Pansy.

    I wonder how Draco will feel when Hermione learns the truth and vice versa. It should be an interesting conversation.
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  • From Silent Pluto on November 09, 2011
    kewl. I like this story. I like this draco, he has soo much depth to his personality.
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  • From ANON - SarahWhitman on October 28, 2011
    Oh how I wish we could see their costumes! And even more so, get caught in the heat that's created when Draco gazes at Hermione!! Loving this! Thank you for posting something new!!
    SW
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  • From ANON - Nicole on October 17, 2011
    Oh I LOVE this story!!! What an interesting and relativly new concept! Please, Please continue! :)
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  • From Divinit on October 16, 2011
    I'm enjoying your story.

    Suggestion: Please space more between your paragraphs and conversations. This would make your story much easier to read and more enjoyable for your readers.
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  • From ANON - colao on October 16, 2011
    you've done a wonderful job of making me anxious for them to get together
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  • From CafeAuLait on October 16, 2011
    YAY!!! Thanks for updating. I enjoyed the update and I can't wait to see how things develop. I'm sure there will be plenty of angst a head.
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  • From amerereader on October 01, 2011
    Ooooh, that was good! I can't wait for the dance! I hope you update soon! :-)

    -A Mere Reader
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  • From ANON - SarahWhitman on September 28, 2011
    Oh how lovely to have you back! And what a chapter! I liked every single "scene" so I don't know what feedback I can give that will be helpful. I think the choice of costumes is great. Is Luna a fairy? And I finally feel "okay" with this new world. Like Hermione, I had trouble letting go of the "old world"..but you summed it up so perfectly that it is as though you are in my head. And I, as with everyone else, am so curious as to what Draco is thinking during all of this. CANNOT wait to see where this goes! Please come back with more, when you can.
    Thanks!
    SW
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  • From ANON - rosemarie8762 on September 27, 2011
    This is one of the best stories I have ever read! Keep up the good work and post soon please!!
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