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Reviews for Harry Potter & the Slytherin Rivals of Hogwarts

By : drcomalfy
  • From Arolen on December 28, 2010
    Please update! Please please please pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssse! lol I loved it
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  • From SParker on December 19, 2010
    about #6...

    Okay, I'm feeling up in arms for my fav. [annoying]
    Ice Prince of Slytherin. Hope he comes up with SOMEthing
    to regain his status in Slytherin AND let his no-good cousin
    know...WHO....RUNS...BORDERTOWN!!! Uhh..I mean SLYTHERIN!!!

    Good job by the way, with how you got this going. :-)
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  • From stray523 on December 19, 2010
    Omigod! That was hilarious! What in the world posessed Harry to do that? Well, whatever it was, I liked it. I bet hte journal's gonna be interesting too. You ARE going to shatre it with us aren't you? :P
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  • From erospandora on December 18, 2010
    interesting


    ~eros
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 13, 2010
    about #5...

    Now that's the Demitria I know...slowly but surely
    you'll get back into the swing of things with this
    story.

    As a matter of fact, have u ever thought about doing
    a HP fic based on an IY idea?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 12, 2010
    about #4...

    First of all, where in tha' BLOODY hell have u been???

    Second, this newer version is intriguing like where it's
    going so far...and personally just keep them in character
    as much as possible and just give them everyday issues to deal
    with & you'll be fine with this story.

    ...it doesn't have to be complicated how the story should
    be told.
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  • From stray523 on August 18, 2009
    That was great! Draco baiting is always a good thing, the uptight little git needs a shaking up now and then. And the only thing better than a disconcerted Draco is a topless, sweaty Harry making a disconcerted Draco. Oh, and the reviewer who says there's no humor on here is WRONG. I've found plenty of funny here. The story "Hot Fudge" almost made me pee my pants. Of course that could just be because of the vivid mental pictures I get when I read. Anywho........I really like the new chapter and can't wait for the next one. :D
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  • From erospandora on August 14, 2009
    hm, love the way that was handled in this chapter -takes off shirt- lol great ^^... also its very nice to see your keeping everyone regularly in their actual characters go you) not many people really an its nice

    keep it up, more please.
    ~eros
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 13, 2009
    Lovely! I can't wait for chapter 4!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 11, 2009
    about #3...

    I can definitely tell you've changed this story, I don't remember
    some of these things happening. I can also tell you're trying to
    feel your way back. :-)

    As for stories, I'm going to tell right now the majority that is
    written is the usual angst, drama or intrigue. BUT, there isn't
    any humor written here..AT..ALL. That's why I was wondering if
    you would take up the mantle.

    I think you ought to check out a few stories before you get going.

    But, stay away from Lomonaareen's stories, because once you read one,
    you'll get hooked and NOT concentrate on your own. Plus, they're the
    FASTEST updater I've EVER seen.

    That goes for Digitallace also. Storywise, not update. :-) She's kind
    of busy now.

    So far, the Veela stories have been exhausted..FINALLY. No one has come
    up with anything original lately.

    Vampire stories have crept back a little. I kinda nudged Lomonaaren to go
    ahead and complete the Mongoose trilogy...'Mongoose', 'Viper' & 'The Long
    Desired'. Check them out. I dare you to stop reading them once you get
    started, they are THAT different.

    I try to bypass the rape stories, that does NOTHING for me.

    I'm tired of the abuse stories.

    So, that leaves the UNtouched genre of humor. Nobody seems to have a
    funny bone in their body...and that's where you come in, mah' dear.

    You up for it?
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  • From kelsin79 on August 11, 2009
    I really like this story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on August 11, 2009
    Grr... I was GONNA read the original. Had it started and everything... Then I was out a computer for quite some time. Now I have all the awful WAITING to do!!! *sob* Anyways, if you want, you can read my stories. They're rather original, as far as HP fics go, if not as well-written as yours. I get by, and I have fans, so there you go. It works. Anyways, since you asked on the mailing list, I want to see e-mate dot com updated. Pretty Please?????? *bribes you with cookies*
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  • From ANON - jjl on August 11, 2009
    A good begining. Hoping for more.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 05, 2009
    Can't wait for chapter 3!!!
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  • From erospandora on August 04, 2009
    its good so far the last bit of chapter two was a little confusing when going back and forth with who you were referring to but good none the less can't wait to see more, of course as always wish chapters were longer but alas not much i can do with that SO yes more please.
    ~eros
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