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Reviews for Help Me Draco

By : ronsmistress
  • From ANON - SJ on March 28, 2016
    sooo....im liking it so far, interesting twist to the story, n i like ron and pansy....idk why but it makes sense to me hahaha and i found it so awesome that he saved her and comforted her when she was rapped.
    but just....the 4th chapter is where i am now....and seeing as u have rape in ur story as happening to pansy right off the bat, and draco is a caring friend to pansy....u wud think he wud b more sensitive to the issue of rape, and hermione is deff showing sensitivity to the issue of rape right from the get go.
    so whats bugging me about this, is tech what draco just did to hermione (in the 4th chapter), was done so without consent so cud be considered as a form of rape/assault...bc she did say no right off the bat, and he just grabbed her, silenced and locked the door, physically bound her hands with his own, and just pushed his free hand into her pants. i thought for sure he would have backed off and gotten her verbal consent before he continued on. but he didnt, he just physically held her against the wall and forced himself on her. and i was shocked that he didnt stop when she said to stop, and that she wasnt upset that he overpowered her and forced himself on her, regardless of if she enjoyed it or not. in the moment she was scared, she said no.
    i still deff want to read this story, it was recommended on a dramione tumblr page, and i like how there is little hate between the characters....i just wished to point that factor out, as constructive criticism.
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  • From Trelweny on July 25, 2012
    HA!! I was thinking Neville.... but then wondered how that would go with Draco asking... Heck, I'm STILL wondering that even with it Proven!

    Delightful story. I can imagine Hermione over-thinking and over-studying this matter. It was really fun seeing Draco as concerned 'teacher' rather than someone interested for purely selfish reasons. Perhaps stretching the character MO a bit... but all in all it worked. I liked it.

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From moni on October 13, 2010
    love the story.... cant wait to see what draco up to ??
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  • From ExperimentalMe on August 26, 2009
    Great smutty piece. I enjoyed it immensely. I liked the ending too. Great that it was Neville. I'm a fan of yours!
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  • From blondpierogi on August 17, 2009
    Neville??? omg wow!!! hahaha he turn himself into Draco so they could have a threesome... hahaha good twist!!!
    Great story!! you did a great job!!!
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  • From WitchHazel on August 17, 2009
    Wow I never saw that coming, what a great read.
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  • From mhaj78 on August 16, 2009
    AHHHHH I NEVER SAW THAT COMING!!!! Effing BRILLIANT!!!
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  • From margaritama on August 16, 2009
    NEVILLE??? LOL - LMAO! Oh yeah!

    GREAT ending and it was sweet and sexy and so them.
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  • From buriedalivebylove69 on August 16, 2009
    Tell me you are going to make a sequel!
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  • From kazfeist on August 16, 2009
    A lovely ending, and you DID surprise me! What a nice touch, choosing Neville! :D
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  • From dragongirl on August 16, 2009
    Ok that was very cute!!!!!!!! Love it a lot... But this is up for an epilogue or a sequel... I know I love stories and I do not want them to end....LOL
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  • From 800emz008 on August 16, 2009
    I aplogise for everything i am about to say...
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    THE END!! THE END!!! you cant leave it there!!! YOU BITCH!!!!!!!
    COME ON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue on.
    do a story where they graduate and go on to university or something..

    please please pwetty pwease?? Ill take back what i said about you being a bitch
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  • From jessirose85 on August 16, 2009
    I knew it!!

    I loved this story pansyweasley..please write another Pansy/Ron soon xx
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  • From katiekrm on August 16, 2009
    That ending cracked me up! Neville was a great choice. He always greatly admired and respected Hermione and he turns into such a stud by the end of the books.
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  • From purpleann on August 16, 2009
    OMG NEVILLE!!!! I love the wink he sent her there at the end. Brilliant!

    OK not to be greedy, but when is your next Ron/Pansy story coming out? I can't wait!!!! :)
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