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Reviews for Eyes That Can See in the Dark

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on August 11, 2009
    about #2...

    ''The Day[s] in the Life of Draco, the Newest Lupin in the Pack''

    This was a neat little view in the slice of life that goes on, since
    they ARE just in the woods with only themselves for company. But,
    the question is...what now?

    They have to get back to society someway, even Remus tried to make that
    possible. By the way, is this following canon, is Remus dead? Because
    he could have helped a little.

    But, then again, there IS Hermione Granger.
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  • From Dezra on August 11, 2009
    I really love this story. Will Draco ever beat Hyacinth?
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  • From Juana13 on August 10, 2009
    oh awesome! I loved this chapter! It explains a lot about Leila, and more about Harry. I'm glad that you wrote this chapter. It proves that even Harry isn't perfect still. He needs Draco, now. And that's good. He doesn't have to carry such a huge burden alone anymore. But while Hyacinth is dom and keeps to herself, and Celia plays with Josh and practices with him, Leila can help harry. I'm glad that Draco is helping out everybody, especially Leila. Until now, all everyone has seen of her was just brewing potions and carrying herself around with an injured foot. Now, Draco has helped her realize that she can truly make a difference. She can help Harry, and that's better than anything.

    I'm also happy to notice how well Draco has fit in with everything. He's taking the right course of action as being Harry's partner, as well as one of the pack.
    I hope the next chapter tells more, and I hope that it is updated soon. Can't wait, and I really look forward to it : )
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 10, 2009
    I feel so lazy. I wish I was a dog and could just lie down all day. I have dog envy.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 06, 2009
    Oh I was curious how Harry and Draco would make out(and I want some smut too).
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 06, 2009
    Ooo..me likes a lot!*does a freakin' happy dance*

    I know people will assume that Hyacinth has a 'thing' for Harry, BUT I
    see it's mostly as a test of 'is he worth being the next beta in the pack
    OR a beta in general'. Of COURSE, she cares for Harry, but it was NEVER
    impressed upon me that she would have been 'in love'.


    ..and even though the hunt was a tad toned down, I liked it just
    as the last.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 05, 2009
    Wow! Can't wait for chapter 2!!! Draco will get her next time!!!
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  • From Juana13 on August 05, 2009
    Wow. That was amazing. I'm so glad that draco can finally be one with the pack and now be an equal to Harry. too bad about draco and Hyacinth. I can understand why she feels the need to challenge him, but why now?
    curious to find out what happens next. hope this isn't the end. I wanna see some harry/draco smut!!!!
    looking forward to it!!
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