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Reviews for Insomnia

By : marsmodellover
  • From Shellnet on April 04, 2019

    I wish this was fineshed  before it was abandoned it was realy good 


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  • From Popcornbandit on September 28, 2009
    I love it I want more!!! Such a evil cliffhanger, I can't wait to see if Voldemort tries to make Mione a Death Eater too. =O!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 03, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From DarQuing on September 03, 2009
    No, you're not. :P You just had to interrupt things when they were getting good, didn't you? :P I don't remember seeing Harry's reaction (aside from realizing that Snape was the one put the bun in her oven).

    Please update soon! :)
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 02, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From DarQuing on August 28, 2009
    Gah! Evil cliffie! :P This looks like its going to be an interesting marriage. :)

    Update soon! :)
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  • From serinblackmoon on August 28, 2009
    Wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work! Glad you fixed the text so we don't have to scroll left and right.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2009
    just use your imagination. it does get better with time..lol..good story so far..cant wait to read more. im glad yo fixed the layout of the story..it was getting frustrating to read that way..much happier now..lol..good luck with this story.
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  • From serinblackmoon on August 21, 2009
    I'm liking the story. Yes, it has a traumatic beginning, but the fact that Snape regrets this and knows it out of his control is great. Second, I applaud the fact that you made it more to Hermione's personality to recognize it wasn't Snape and forgive him. To those who are screaming this is wrong, it isn't. psychologically women of this kind of trauma can forgive when they WANT to, it's all about how THEY feel and how badly it impacted them. (sorry, old human sexuality calls popping up) I like how you've given each character a more realistic feel and really let them flow in your own way. Keep up the good work!!!!

    ~Serin
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  • From buriedalivebylove69 on August 21, 2009
    I like your story so far but I have just a few suggestions for you. One, I noticed and it may just be my laptop but the first five chapters I had to use my side to side scroll bar just to read your story. I suggest you try to make your paragraphs a bit shorter, like instead of your paragraph going to the end of your page when maybe it gets a few inches away start another line. And the second is space out your paragraphs and dialog. This is much easier on you and your reader when they read your story. Other than those two things your story is very good and I can't wait to read more
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on August 20, 2009
    Excellent
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  • From Citten on August 20, 2009
    Yes short but they are getting longer. :) i really liked the chapter too! :) poor severus he really thinks the worst of himself. and poor hermione i really wonder how she will keep it from him, and for how long? dont wait to long and update soon! i really do hope that you will not rush through these next nine months! so how will the rest of them take it too? (her friends, the order, her parents and poor severus)
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  • From DarQuing on August 19, 2009
    Surprisingly, I'm enjoying this story. I don't usually enjoy N/C fics. I think the biggest reason I'm enjoying this story is because the rape scene is at the beginning and it was handled relatively quickly. The only part that's really annoying is the way the screen is stretched, but that's not your fault and its relatively easily fixed by copy and pasting the chapter into a word processing program (such as Wordpad, Notepad, or MS Word).

    Please update soon! :)
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  • From Sampdoria on August 19, 2009
    I am trilled to see the update, this is such an interesting and captivating story.
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  • From jlclark on August 18, 2009
    Nice. I am really liking this story. Keep up the great work and please update soon.
    Also thanks for changing the margins in the text box; it makes reading much easier :)
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