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Reviews for The Radiant

By : alecto
  • From Serranna on December 31, 2009
    Wow, I can't believe how wonderful this story is. Makes me want to go back and completely overhaul everything I've written, to make my language more fluid, descriptive and meaningful. I love all the little details you include, like when Lucius peers out the window through the pictures she's written on them. And your erotica is so damn erotic. Thanks again for writing!
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  • From Serranna on December 28, 2009
    I really, really enjoyed reading this story. Your writing is wonderful and you created a believable and sexy relationship. Why aren't their more Ginny/Lucius fanfics out there?

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From badkittyuno on December 20, 2009
    Really enjoying this one...glad you update so often! That dress is beautiful, btw, definitely suited for a goddess.
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  • From WilliamSpike on December 09, 2009
    Yes, went very well.
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  • From apkblack on October 15, 2009
    That was an exceedingly hot and sensual chapter. Even with the first half of it being merely a description of their aches&pains the morning after ... and I find it fascinating that the descriptions of their aches and pains was so sexy. Will attribute it to your skill as a writer. :-)

    One minor quibble ... the visual that came with this line ... "her tongue swiping at the stray rivulets around her chin" ... was kind of weird. It's really hard for a tongue to swipe at it's own chin, unless it's abnormally long. You know? Gene Simmons might be able to pull it off, but the rest of us ... not so much.

    Hoping your difficulties ease ...
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  • From WilliamSpike on August 30, 2009
    (Post Ch. 10) This is pretty great stuff..you're really finding a stride here.
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  • From BeaBibliophile on August 28, 2009
    Their dynamic is so strange and beautiful and bitter that I'm unsure where their relationship is headed. Their little question and answer exchange was interesting as well. We see them attempting to connect on a deeper level, but I'm unsure of they're making much progress. They (and by they, I mean you) have exquisite taste in literature and music!

    Bea
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  • From ksevfansd on August 25, 2009
    Bravo! Well done. It is a joy to find such a well written and spirited Lucius fic! Love the scene with Lucius walking in on Ginny and Draco. It was... perfect!
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  • From BeaBibliophile on August 25, 2009
    Chapter Nine: This was a very potent chapter, Alecto! I like the tension between Lucius and Ginny, the slight awkwardness and strain. Your prose is lyrical and bittersweet and emotive. Brava!

    Bea
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  • From ICKYintimidation on August 25, 2009
    god, you're a fantastic writer.
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  • From Ele on August 23, 2009
    Nice story. I especially liked the tension at the beginning. The latest chapters can - for me personally - not totally live up to that, to the expectation that was built up with the first chapters. In the end, their sex looks pretty usual and the thrill of the forbidden is lost as well.

    A little tip: dialogue would be easier to understand if the people acting in one paragraph were the same that speak.
    E.g. you wrote [QUOTE]Ginny seemed to sense it and looked down at him, almost smiling.


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  • From ICKYintimidation on August 22, 2009
    YES! this particular pervert is super happy!
    damn, you are a fantastic author... i am so looking forward to more. :)
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  • From BeaBibliophile on August 22, 2009
    Perverts? Hardly. *sniffs* It seems I fell a bit behind in my reviewing. Unlike fanfiction.net, this website lacks a proper alert system. Anyway, I'm quite with the way things are progressing; there was so much tension building that it just had to spill over eventually. And spill over it did! Dear Lord, that was a vicious shag. Very sexy, though, and appropriate, considering their personalities and prejudices and proclivities. I'm curious as to how their relationship is going to progress.

    Regards,
    Bea
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  • From ICKYintimidation on August 21, 2009
    I must say that your style of writing is unlike any other that I have come across. I am IN LOVE with this story... and I love Puukko (sorry if the spelling is wrong) as well. I can't wait to read more of The Radiant... I am SOOO looking forward to the first time Lucius and Ginny get together. :)
    Awesome story... I can't wait to read more! :) Keep up the great work!
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  • From BeaBibliophile on August 15, 2009
    Chapter Four: I am sorry for not having reviewed this sooner. I
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