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Reviews for Bad Little Miss Granger

By : AllyMalfoy
  • From Persy on January 04, 2022

    Hot AF!!!!! Hope you plan to write more!!!!


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  • From Persy on August 24, 2021

    HOTTTTT!!!!!


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  • From ANON - snapefan1983 on October 25, 2014
    i am not against cumming on the face etc but i have it on very good athority that(and before you say anything, this is not an old fashioned myth etc that) getting cum in the eyes can cause blindness!!! PS please add MORE to this story!!!!!! :-)
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  • From Mariana01 on June 10, 2011
    That was really great! Congratulations =]
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  • From jaimelee on March 22, 2011
    Oh such a great story! I wish you would write more to this... more chapters or a sequel. I'd love to see what detention is going to be like!
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  • From incubusdreams7 on July 03, 2010
    This is actually some really good smut lol. You should continue the story! :)
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  • From ANON - JK on June 25, 2010
    Can I just ditto the above review? I'll beg for more if you want. This was all kinds of hot. Love Dom!Snape and Innocent!Hermione. More, more, more! Even if it's not this story, I'd love to see others from you.
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  • From ANON - anonnick on September 27, 2009
    why doesn't this have more reviews? this was really good and it should have hundreds of people begging for more! guess i'll have to beg for the masses. please, please, please write more! loved all of it. snape being angry and hermione a bad, naughty girl when she's done nothing. like creepy snape. also agree with the reviewer above. you left things open to interpretation (sp?). our hermione could be as old or as young as our deviant minds would like. best line: "Am I.... unh... a bad girl?" love how confused and naive she is, but worried about disappointed her professor.

    please please please! more!
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  • From ANON - RavenclawJedi on August 30, 2009
    This was your first story? You kid! I want to say it was hot but that would be a gross understatement. This is hella hot! One of the things I really liked was your Snape. He seemed to be angry at his attraction to the girl, so he took it out on her. None of this protective, amorous Snape, but rather he is going to punish her for making him feel this way and get back some control. Good times. Also liked how ambiguous you made Hermione's age. It could take place in an AU 7th year or any time before. The Amortentia was a good idea too. With all the magical elements in the Harry Potter world, you don't see them used that often. Amortentia or Imperio or Love potion from WWW or tons of other stuff with wands. Magic!

    I am really hoping you decide to continue this story. I am interested in detention #2. How else will Snape control and toy with Bad Little Miss Granger whose only sin seems to be tempting her potions professor.
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  • From ANON - Jaelle on August 12, 2009
    that was great! Really enjoyed it... please add more! Would love to see what you come up with next.. maybe more spanking of a naughty miss granger?
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  • From katiekrm on August 10, 2009
    I liked it!
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  • From Snakekat on August 10, 2009
    Great first story, looking forward to reading more of your work in the furture.
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  • From ANON - DracoDormiens on August 10, 2009
    That was really good for your first story. I'd like to read more. Maybe you could tell us what happens at Hermione's next detention! Overall you should definitely continue writing - I know I'll read it.
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  • From LadyMalfoy on August 10, 2009
    That was hot. Wonder just how hot the next detention would be.
    I cant believe that's your first though. Wow.
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  • From WesleyY7 on August 10, 2009
    Let's hear it for potion induced, dubious consent teacher/student sex! Hooray! I'm not a Snape fan, but your title and summary caught my interest. This was very, very hot and I love how Snape used Amortentia in his seduction. I don't think the characters were OOC, at least not Hermione. Considering the potion was fogging up her thoughts, she still put up some resistance. Although not much as a)Snape is an authority figure and b)she was more considered with her Potions grade. If you do continue this story, I'm interested in what type of potion, drug, or spell Snape would use to get her the next time.

    One thing I did notice was you had both characters talking within the same paragraph which was a little distracting. Writing rules usually say that a new paragraph begins when the speaker changes. Sorry!

    I can't believe this is your first fic! Really, really enjoyed this and can't wait to read something of yours again. I'm always a fan of chocolate chip cookies, but I'd rather have more of the story. Especially, MrsDracoMalfoy, if your husband decides to join in. Draco would so use that Amortentia for his own purposes. ;)
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