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Reviews for H.J. Potter-Diggory

By : jaymclg
  • From ANON - foxee-chik on January 31, 2017

    wow! keep goin! i liked it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!


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  • From ANON - Twiggz on October 06, 2015
    Is this going to continue?? I very much enjoyed it.
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  • From Winged-ashes on August 28, 2014
    I liked it at the bigenning but then the part with Harry's memos had too much angst and was much too long
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 31, 2013
    I'm confused about something that seems to be implied in chapter 10. Is Draco some kind of magical creature who recently awoke to his inheritance, and his creature side chose Harry as his mate even before the law was made? *lol* Why else would he supposedly 'go insane' if he HAD gotten Harry to marry him, and Harry had spited him by turning himself over to Voldemort rather than be Draco's spouse, like Snape suggest Harry might have done if he had been forced to be Draco? Won't he still go insane, now that his mate is married in a unbreakable magical marriage to someone else?
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  • From FlameDancer on November 07, 2013
    this is well written, although the pensive sense are bit disturbing though i would like to know wat the Cedric's parents are thinking while veiwing them. other than that i wish for this to continue
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  • From ANON - carrie on October 15, 2013
    I really love this story!! Hope that you do not give this one up!! Hope to see an update soon!!

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  • From ladylizzy on November 15, 2011
    In the latest chapter you use the word 'neutering' when you meant to say 'nurturing'. I think this many dark memories would have been fine except that you repeat each memory with each group that views it. I understand wanting to get the reaction of each person, but the constant reviewing of the memory is what gets tedious.

    With that said I am enjoying the story, and do think JKR let the ball drop on the abuse by Dumbledore and the other professors never knowing what Harry went through each summer. And why did they never notice how much thinner he was when he came back to school?


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  • From ANON - roo on November 08, 2011
    Your story started really well, I was intrigued with the Cedric/Harry pairing, it's so seldomly done, however, how many chapters of abuse do you need? I think we all get that he was abused, I fail to see what continuing to descibe abuse is achieving except to lose you readers, This is only the second ever negative review I ahve givenin my 3 plus years of reviewing fanfic.
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  • From ChaosLady on November 08, 2011
    I don't think I ever review this before but I am sick of the dark memories too. But if one of them includes Harry kicking ass with wandless magic than I want to see that!
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  • From HannaFO on November 07, 2011
    I just now started reading your fic and I must say I am very much enjoying it :) However it seems chapter 13 / your 8th update is gone so I cant read on :( I really hope it's just a glitch that I can't see it however Could you check? I would relly like to read more, but don't want to skip a chapter....
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  • From ANON - Wesley Molt on August 24, 2011
    I have a FAR better way for them to get rid of the Dursley's than what they've been planning. The Ministry would, at worst, throw them in Azkaban for the rest of their lives, torture, but not as satisfying as their plans. If Moony, Padfoot and Snape had their way, THEY'D be thrown in Azkaban for the rest of their lives. BUT with my plan, the Dursley's end up dead or insane, and they'd have a chance to end the war. My plan: use Sev's position as a Death Eater spy to lure Voldemort to 4 Privet Drive claiming that Harry would be there until September 1, but the blood wards would fall on July 31. That would allow Voldemort a chance to face Harry again. But Harry would have left, leaving the Dursley's vulnerable to the Death Eaters. Once the Death Eaters are through with the Dursley's, the Order attacks them, and voila! Vengeance against the Dursley's AND a chance to end the war in one stroke. BTW, I thought Harry had threatened the Dursley's with vengeance from Sirius after Third Year, how is it that the walrus was willing to beat him up?
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  • From mysticalangel5 on July 28, 2011
    WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I love the story so far, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. The suspense is really starting to get to me!
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  • From dominique1 on June 28, 2011
    i hope the dursley die painfully and i hope that harry's family get to help
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  • From dominique1 on June 28, 2011
    i had to re read this story want more
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  • From dominique1 on June 28, 2011
    want more please update soon
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