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Reviews for H.J. Potter-Diggory

By : jaymclg
  • From dominique1 on June 28, 2011
    want more i hope that harry gets his happiness and severus and sirius
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  • From dominique1 on June 28, 2011
    this is a brilliant story
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 26, 2011
    This definitely an interesting fic. I was captivated by the memories Harry showed the others of his past. I could see the Dursley's easily doing something like that. Completely spell-bound and full of dread at the idea that the memories were going to get worse at things went. I even smiled a bit at the idea of Cedric and Harry being pregnant at the same time. It was very enjoyable and I had almost hoped it'd be more of a humourous fic but am not disappointed in the least that this is angst ridden. I did however find it difficult to read at times not because of one or two typos but just the sheer repetitiveness. Like for example when any one characther said something for a long time you continue on their tangent by seperating with 'continued, finally, concluded' to the point that I was yanking out my hair. I'd sort of wish you'd just put the whole conversation in one or two paragraphs instead of disecting them so finally. I guess I'd have gotten over it but when you do it for each conversation that goes on for more than three sentences than it gets a bit irritating. Same with everyones view of the memories. Cedric's memory of the memory should be sufficient enough but you end up showing Snape and Black's going through the motions although the description of the events are slightly miniumum. I guess it's okay but when it's done every single time and you know what's coming each and every time it sort of seems tiring. Otherwise this was a nice fic you had started. Too bad when I started reading this yesterday you hadn't offically gotten to the point where they were pregnant. That definitely be amusing seeing what odd cravings they might have and who may be taking care of the two when they get further into pregnancy. Most likely Cedric's parents. =3
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  • From hellangelhellina on April 04, 2011
    the comedy relief dose help get through the horror of the memories. i am o glad you didn't ditch this story.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on March 28, 2011
    I love this story! Please please please please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - dominique 1 on March 28, 2011
    i love it happy that you updted it want more
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  • From ANON - Lizz on February 26, 2011
    I love this story, you've done a brilliant job!
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  • From ANON - Kat on February 03, 2011
    All I have to say is simply amazing :D I've always loved Cedric/Harry but it's hard to find more then oneshots :( Please continue you are a wonderful writer and will deff be looking for updates.
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  • From slayer-of-evil on September 11, 2010
    Cool story can't wait for more please write more when can & will. :)
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  • From ANON - Skiingkid on March 28, 2010
    I would love to see this story continued. I began reading it even before I was a member and enjoyed every minute of it. Good work and hope you continue this story.
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  • From on March 12, 2010
    yeah great chapter can
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  • From on March 12, 2010
    yeah great chapter.
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  • From on March 12, 2010
    yeah great chapter.
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  • From on March 12, 2010
    yeah great chapter.
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  • From on March 12, 2010
    yeah great chapter.
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