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Reviews for Broken

By : lilmisblack
  • From Heidi191976 on August 19, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From yewneek90 on August 19, 2009
    This is a great story so far! I also like how the chapters are short, but hold a lot of information. It makes for an enjoyable read. You have talent; keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more chapters :)
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  • From KellyJCR on August 19, 2009
    I love your story. It well written and interesting in the fact that she started out with Harry and is slowly inching towards Sirius. Am I wrong or did I detect a bit of "Kiss the Girls" in there? More specifically the way she was found. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!
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  • From apkblack on August 19, 2009
    Nice start so far. You've set it up with some good suspense: What happened to her? What's happened in the intervening years? The thing with the watch/time is an interesting way of focusing us on Hermione's 'brokenness' ... she's still herself, in there somewhere, needing to focus on details, but not having the facts at her disposal, she's focusing on the only clear information she has in front of her ... what's on the watch.

    Looking forward to wherever you're going to take this.
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  • From IntegraHellsing on August 19, 2009
    WOW, this sounds like it will be very intense! I can't wait for more, please update soon.
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 17, 2009
    A great story. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - koneko-chan on August 13, 2009
    I like where the story is going. Can't wait to see your next update.
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