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Reviews for Torn

By : starstruck86
  • From talley on August 27, 2009
    What a journey! I was really scared about their relationship and not only if it would last but also if it would stay the same. Good writing is showing it didn't just was saying sorry and bam back as they were before. Is it bad I felt really bad for George, the dog? Was excited the other George not is out but that he's got a true boyfriend. Way to hide that one. Again, you draw me into the story and keep those emotions going and being true. Now I have to say I'm grumpy. You promised you'll be done with this series with two more stories, but I don't want you to be done. *cries hysterically* I agree Ron didn't do much reacting and I was worried how it would boil over. I was soooooo worried what the big event was that you were warning about I read the reviews to make sure my fears were not reality. Because I just couldn't take it, so I'm glad at your promise about the moods of the next fics. Babbling as usual, but again I do love your writing and this series.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on August 16, 2009
    There's so much in this I love. First of all, you've managed to convery Ron's temper as completely believable. It's really difficult to write someone when he's in a particular bad mood - when every little thing annoys you so much, when you *know* you're being insufferable and rude and do not deserve anyone's concern for you in that particular moment, but you *can't* feel better, and you can't summon the will to care about it, really. Incredibly good characterizations for the rest of the Weasley family, after Molly. And George's (the dog) attittude: yay for him for sticking up for Severus.

    Also, I liked how you incorporated every tiny detail from the previous fics into this: the effects of their actions in the chain bond, the previous injuries, their friends' and family's troubles and own storylines (such as George and Seamus).

    And you hit on another of my kinks: leather jackets, although it depends on the man who is wearing them, mostly. A good leather jacket, on a man who knows how to wear it, is incredibly appealing.

    And Severus's hair: lovely, all those moments in which it was included (thank you, before I forget).

    And finally, the future child: I believe Severus couldn't be happier about it, really, and that was a gesture of Ron's love that touched him incredibly deeply.

    Another great fic,

    Davinci

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  • From ANON - Jaino on August 14, 2009
    I LOVED it! I've read every single one of your Ron/Snape fictions and have fallen hard for each one! This had the right amount of angst and cuddle monkeyness
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  • From ANON - Sheree on August 13, 2009
    You had me enthralled with the first chapter - it was gripping (pun intended) and more than naughty. Unfortunately, I had to re-read some of the later parts as the pages began to blur from my watery eyes - and it didn't make them any better (I was still tear-y - LOL). It was moving, but not wallow-y (word?)- Just enough angst and second guessing (between R & S) to keep us tuned in and wondering how our boys were going to get their heads out of their arses.

    Luckily, they came full circle, but please tell me they won't need to wait 4 years for the twins (**winkwink LOL).

    Waiting impatiently for the rest of the story.....
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