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Reviews for Predicting the Future Brightness

By : margaritama
  • From Trelweny on July 25, 2012
    Brilliant! I personally thought it was a wonderful use of the prompts. All the astronomy information was really fun to read in conversation, instead of the usual non-fiction sources. ;)

    Personally I've always liked Scorpius. Don't understand what Hermione's issue with the name was. Don't understand how she was convinced to use it either.

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From stargirll on December 30, 2009
    I've loved reading this and could go on to read more.
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  • From blondpierogi on August 24, 2009
    Hey!!! anoter bloody brilliant story written by you. I love how you went with the challange and did an AWESOME job!! It was a great way for those two to get together and I cannot believe that she let draco name their son Scorpius.
    Once again, GREAT JOB!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 16, 2009
    I don't think there is anything on the planet that could make me like the name Scorpius, but at least you gave me lovely story to go with it. lol I really admire those of you who can take a challenge and run with it, as I get too stymied to complete one. lol And, I applaud your story!! That was simply scrumptious! Thank you, hon! HG4eva
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  • From Robs on August 16, 2009
    another fabulous one-shot from you! Written from a brilliant prompt too. I love the astronomy link. Keep up the good work!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 16, 2009
    That really touched me. It's amazing what you can do in so few words. It's really a talent. I really liked this a lot. Loved Pansy's plotting behind the scenes, and how quickly they came together and how quickly it heated up because of their longing. Just wonderful and so romantically hot. Great job as usual.

    My favorite line: They lay side by side in silence before she added with a sigh,
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2009
    I've been waiting for you to actually make your appearance again...lol. I love your stories and oneshots. I always look forward to reading your creative writing. Seriously. You are one heck of a good writer. Keep it up. Aw. It was great, short one shot. I loved it. I hope your next oneshot or fic is about a dark, sexy, dominante, posessive draco Malfoy and or intellegent, petite, war heroine, Hermione Granger. Great job!

    LS
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  • From RynStar15 on August 16, 2009
    Great job, as always, and I salute you for your information. Definitely added to the story since our Hermione would of course know everything about it. No Ogden's Old in this one, eh? Oh well, maybe next time ;)

    Yours,
    Ryn
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  • From kazfeist on August 15, 2009
    That was just charming! :D
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  • From Itsbeenvery on August 15, 2009
    (I thought I reviewed this earlier but must have closed the window instead)

    What an enjoyable story! Thank you for linking this on the dramione comm, I was happy to read this. I really liked reading about what happened with the group of characters post-war and how they connected, along with the specific relationship between Draco and Hermione. I also enjoyed the astronomy angle of the whole thing - it was wonderful! :D
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 15, 2009
    Brilliantly written! I love your stories! They are always filled with emotion, and yor characters always seem to stand out, like they are real. The research you did enhanced the story so much and made it that much more enjoyable to read. Great job. I always look forward to your stories.

    xoxox
    Lady B*
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  • From shelagh on August 15, 2009
    Execellent!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2009
    I love astronomy. And what I wouldn't give to have a 'you beaut' telescope too. (sigh) And I love that you've got different pairings in there. Pansy and Harry - how intriguing and Ginny and Blaise (lucky bitch!!) ;) LMAO. Having just seen Half Blood Prince I don't know why Ron would go back to Lavendar but that's beside the point. LOL And how poetic that it was Pansy who's behind the scenes pushing our couple closer together. :)


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  • From mhaj78 on August 15, 2009
    So beautiful and sweet! I don't know why, but the ending actually made me shiver! lovely ;)
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  • From smmz79 on August 15, 2009
    aahhh what a great one shot... i laughed when their son was named scorpius that was funny.... but if course draco knew he would get what he wanted... i liked how he referenced hermione as his sun and him as a comet theat burns brighter when close to her...
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