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Reviews for Quadrophenia

By : LaurennnMalfoy
  • From LaurennnMalfoy on September 27, 2009
    Thanks for the reviews, all are appreciated, a bit of criticism never hurt anyone!
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  • From curikitten on August 17, 2009
    Did anyone mention that you would be well served to have a skilled and patient beta look at your work? I made it through both chapters because I'm intrigued by the plot thus far, but normally such a proliferation of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors would have forced me to stop long before the end of the first two paragraphs.

    This piece certainly has potential. A little attention to mechanical detail would go a long way in silencing other complaints, as well.

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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on August 16, 2009
    Interesting start., Wonder where it will go! I do think it's a bit teenage angsty? Not my favorite personally,. but I think this really has potential. I would advise you to try to avoid stereotypes though., I'm not sure since it's just the first chapter but first impressions are everything! Goodluck with your writing!
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  • From LadyMalfoy on August 16, 2009
    Interesting beginning, I gotta say you have me wanting more.
    And I love the part about Draco pulling a Cruel Intentions move.
    I can absolutely picture that happening.
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  • From Queenie7 on August 16, 2009
    Im enjoying your writing style. Good description, good dialog, its got real promise.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2009
    keep going!! hope the next chapter comes out soon!!!
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