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Reviews for In Need of a Little Comfort

By : Monddame
  • From katiekrm on August 26, 2009
    May I please have a box of those chocolates? I love Draco's earnestness in wanting to have a chance with Hermione. They both realize all they have going against them. Draco just needs to open up a bit. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 26, 2009
    I have got to get some of those chocolates!! lol Forgetful Fog...loved it! And, I like that he certainly doesn't hate her. ;-) Can't wait for more! HG4eva
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  • From margotlefaye on August 26, 2009
    I'm really enjoying the chocolates, their various effects, and how they move the relationship along. And, of course, I'm dying to know what Pansy is up to. What's a romance without an obstacle or ten to overcome? Looking foreard to reading more.
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  • From kazfeist on August 26, 2009
    Thanks for another lovely update. You've cleared up the timeline, for me, at any rate. :D Can't wait for more. :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2009
    Don't mind me, mnost of the time my questions are merely my musings or for my own amusement as the case might be. You don't have to answer any of them but if you happen to do so during the course of your story, that's good too. :)

    Loved the vulnerability you showed in Draco with this one. Such insight, he so wants her to like him, and like him for simply being Draco and nothing more than that. I wonder if she will see it too? I also like seeing her side of it, being so afraid to be hurt, too caught up so quickly to know that she's already halfway there. I want to know where I can get my hands on some chocolates like that. LOL But maybe I should wait until I find out more about what they actually do and the story behind them.

    And of course, that last little cliffy - now there's an answer I look forward to finding out. Just who has got Draco in their sights? The obvious guess is Pansy but you might not do the obvious. LOL Look forward to finding out. :) And an afterthought, Hermione seems rather experienced, wonder if Draco can deal with not being her first??? :) Or was that the chocolate 'talking'? Hee hee!!
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  • From margaritama on August 26, 2009
    I think Pansy needs to get hers....I really can't see her getting one other on Draco and she needs to be smacked hard.

    Love this soft yet manly Draco....
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  • From ANON - Niki on August 26, 2009
    I was so excited when I found that you had posted today!! I found your story yesterday and already I can't wait for the next chapter! I love your take on Draco, and the chocolates!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Niki on August 25, 2009
    OMG please continue!!!! /I lOVE IT!!
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  • From ANON - Eppie on August 25, 2009
    Excellent fic. I'm not much for reviewing, but I had to tell you that you are doing a great job. Keep it coming.
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  • From blondpierogi on August 23, 2009
    Hey!! I just read the 1st two chapters of your story. And I have to say that I LIKE IT!!!
    I am glad that you decided to continue with the story verses one chapter only. I am looking forward to finding out what happens next.
    Keep up the great work and i cannot wait to read more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sheep on August 23, 2009
    This is an amazing story, and i also am really shocked that this is your first fanfic, its an amazing and really unique idea and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more of it, id love to see it turned from a 2-shot to a story please! I love the idea that she might eat more of his chocolates just to coax him into bed again :) Its a really hot protrayel of draco and i hope you'll keep writing b.c i sure will keep reading :)
    PLEASE stay with it!

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  • From ANON - sevibaby on August 22, 2009
    That was an amazing chapter. I love how you went inside each of them to let us know what they were thinking and feeling. This chapter did not need any hot amazing sex it was perfect just the way it was. And Pansy is a royal bitch, I just hope she does not hurt Hermione too much.

    Sevibaby
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2009
    Lucky me, I happened along this FABULOUS story after you'd written the second chapter. I am so thrilled that you decided to continue with this story. As a one shot it was indeed fantastic but I'm so glad you were persuaded to write more. I can totally understand Hermione wanting a bit of chocolate after sucha horrendous day (although bumping into Snape would have been a delicious highlight too) but I wouldn't have stopped at two. LOL I'm wondering if the two chocolates combined to make her remember everything long after the supposed heart chocolate's potion/charm wore off or because there was an attraction there between them in the first place, their feelings overcame what the chocolate was supposed to do. Love that she smiled at him when she woke up and he began to realise that she did enjoy being with him and that message on the shower door and his reaction - loved that too!!

    And then the next morning while they're 'pretending not to look at each other' - how I enjoyed the Hermione's thoughts of the talent at school and the conversation at the Slytherin table. It was so funny how Hermione went through her candidates, even contemplating Snape (grins) before admiting to herself that the 'bad boy' was the one she wanted all along. (Heck, any of the 'bad boys' you mentioned in this story work for me) And then to 'hear' that conversation where Pansy was so desperately trying to make herself look better than the 'mudblood' while Theo and Blaise egged her on and admitted that they wouldn't mind a go at Hermione either - LOL Draco must have been going spare trying to keep his thoughts to himself. I get the feeling that Blaise and Theo would actually be supportive of Draco if he were to make his intentions known regarding Hermione and I love that idea too and I don't mind reading about a narky Pansy either so it will be interesting to see what nasty little schemes she has going on. So, in summary - bring on the next chapter - I can't wait. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2009
    I am hoping that you are going to continue this story and am looking forward to the next update!
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  • From kazfeist on August 22, 2009
    Thanks so much for deciding to continue this. Your characterizations of all your players is complex enough to keep my interest. I particularly liked the morning after scene for both Hermione and Draco. I don't mind plot along with my porn at all. And, I always enjoy Head Boy/Head Girl stories. I forget....is Voldemort still alive here, or will Draco have to hew the Death Eater line? Anyway, keep updating, and I can't wait to see how the story goes. Hopefully, Hermione won't be too injured by Pansy's scheming. :D
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